Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Dreams and Disturbing Evidence
Alex is tormented by violent prison dreams and finds a newspaper account connecting Bodybag and Sammy Mitchell to Alcatraz. Physical marks and supernatural episodes deepen his fear that the visions are real.
Key Events
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Violent Prison Dreams — Alex suffers increasingly violent dreams of a prison, dead bodies, and strange sounds. Characters: Alex Gardner
Location: Alex's room
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Roommate Seeks Answers — Alex's roommate tries to help him understand his disturbing visions. Characters: Alex Gardner
Location: Alex's room
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Bodybag Newspaper Article — An article links Bodybag's Alcatraz attack to singer Sammy Mitchell's death. Characters: Alex Gardner, Sammy Mitchell
Location: Not specified
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Visions Seem Connected — Alex believes the recent deaths and his nightmares are linked. Characters: Alex Gardner
Location: Not specified
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Worsening Symptoms — Alex experiences physical marks, exhaustion, and inexplicable supernatural events. Characters: Alex Gardner
Location: Not specified
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Floating Above the Room — Alex appears to float above the room during a supernatural episode. Characters: Alex Gardner
Location: Alex's room
The Night Crossing
Convinced that Alcatraz is calling to Alex, his friends decide to go without waiting until morning. Jack takes them across the bay, and they land in a secluded cove before exploring the island.
Key Events
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Floating Above the Room — Alex appears to float above the room during a supernatural episode. Characters: Alex Gardner
Location: Alex's room
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Friends Choose Alcatraz — Alex's friends decide that Alcatraz is calling to him and choose to go that night. Characters: Alex Gardner, Jack
Location: Not specified
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Crossing the Bay — Jack takes the group across the bay in a small fishing boat. Characters: Alex Gardner, Jack
Location: San Francisco Bay
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Landing in Secluded Cove — The group lands in a secluded cove before exploring the island at night. Characters: Alex Gardner, Jack
Location: Secluded cove on Alcatraz
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Night Search Begins — The group explores Alcatraz at night, and the search quickly becomes dangerous. Characters: Alex Gardner, Jack
Location: Alcatraz Island
A Friend Under Threat
The island search becomes dangerous when Richard disappears and is later found behaving violently and unnaturally. The group struggles to tell their friend apart from the hostile force apparently using his identity while unseen beings pursue them.
Key Events
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Night Search Begins — The group explores Alcatraz at night, and the search quickly becomes dangerous. Characters: Alex Gardner, Jack
Location: Alcatraz Island
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Richard Disappears — Richard disappears while the group is exploring the island. Characters: Richard Gardner, Alex Gardner
Location: Alcatraz Island
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Richard Acts Unnaturally — Richard is found behaving violently and unnaturally, apparently under hostile control. Characters: Richard Gardner, Alex Gardner
Location: Alcatraz Island
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Identity Becomes Uncertain — The others struggle to distinguish Richard from the hostile force using his identity. Characters: Richard Gardner, Alex Gardner
Location: Alcatraz Island
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Pursuit Through Prison — Unseen beings pursue the group through the prison buildings. Characters: Alex Gardner, Richard Gardner
Location: Alcatraz prison buildings
The Passage and the Plan
Alex learns that he has served as a vessel and opened a passage into the living world. He also learns of Sammy's plan to destroy The Commandant & Monster by burning it, though the group has not found a way to do so.
Key Events
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Pursuit Through Prison — Unseen beings pursue the group through the prison buildings. Characters: Alex Gardner, Richard Gardner
Location: Alcatraz prison buildings
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Vessel Revelation — Alex learns that he is being used as a vessel for a powerful evil presence. Characters: Alex Gardner
Location: Alcatraz Island
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Passage Into the Living World — A dead woman explains that Alex opened a passage into the living world by inviting the presence in. Characters: Alex Gardner
Location: Alcatraz Island
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Sammy's Counterplan — Alex learns that Sammy plans to destroy the central evil presence by burning it. Characters: Alex Gardner, Sammy Mitchell, The Commandant & Monster
Location: Alcatraz Island
Trapped Before the Confrontation
Attacks intensify, and Alex's friends blame him while he insists that he is trying to stop the supernatural force. The supplied events end with the survivors still trapped on Alcatraz and preparing for a final confrontation, without showing its resolution.
Key Events
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Friends Blame Alex — As the group is attacked, Alex's friends accuse him of causing their suffering. Characters: Alex Gardner
Location: Alcatraz Island
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Search for a Way to Burn It — Alex and his companions know the entity must be burned but have not worked out how. Characters: Alex Gardner, Sammy Mitchell, The Commandant & Monster
Location: Alcatraz Island
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Final Confrontation Pending — The survivors remain trapped, searching for one another and preparing to confront the evil presence. Characters: Alex Gardner, Richard Gardner, Jack, Sammy Mitchell, The Commandant & Monster
Location: Alcatraz Island