Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Writer's Impossible Publicity
Tony faces eviction and tries to revive his rejected monster book. With Vernon's help, he stages a fake sighting in the Serpentine.
Key Events
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Tony Faces Eviction — Tony's unstable living situation frames his urgent need for success. Characters: Tony Blake, Arnold
Location: Chelsea house
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The Rejected Monster Book — Tony decides to create publicity for his rejected book. Characters: Tony Blake
Location: Chelsea room
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A Monster Is Built — Tony and Vernon construct an artificial Loch Ness Monster. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon
Location: Chelsea house
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Serpentine Photograph — Tony and Vernon photograph the fake creature, startling the Tramp. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon, Tramp
Location: Serpentine
The Road North
Tony and Vernon take their deception to Scotland in a second-hand hearse. Marie joins the journey, adding a personal and romantic dimension to the scheme.
Key Events
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Scotland Scheme Begins — The group travels north to expand the fabricated sighting. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon, Marie
Location: Road to Scotland
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Marie Joins the Journey — The group picks up Marie, a young French hitchhiker. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon, Marie
Location: Roadside
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Arrival at Loch Ness — Tony's group reaches the inn operated by Harry Sutton. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon, Marie, Harry Sutton
Location: Loch Ness inn
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Hidden Salmon Stockpile — Harry tries to conceal dozens of poached salmon from local police. Characters: Harry Sutton
Location: Loch Ness inn
A Village Believes
At Harry Sutton's inn, Vernon's hidden speaker produces convincing roars. Customers and press arrive, turning the hoax into a profitable local sensation.
Key Events
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The Hidden Speaker — Vernon secretly installs equipment to broadcast monstrous roars. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon
Location: Loch Ness area
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Roars Stir the Locals — The broadcast roars make locals increasingly believe the monster exists. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon, Harry Sutton
Location: Loch Ness village
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Inn Crowds Arrive — Customers and press flood the inn after the supposed sighting. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon, Harry Sutton
Location: Loch Ness inn
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The Missing Photograph — Excitement fades when Tony cannot produce the promised monster photograph. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon, Harry Sutton
Location: Loch Ness inn
The Hoax Unravels
Tony cannot supply the promised photograph, while the hidden salmon create additional comic danger. Tony and Vernon attempt another fake sighting as the deception becomes unstable.
Key Events
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Salmon Enter Police Car — The concealed salmon are inadvertently loaded into a police car. Characters: Harry Sutton
Location: Loch Ness inn
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Marie Falls for Tony — Marie develops romantic feelings for Tony during the chaotic visit. Characters: Tony Blake, Marie
Location: Loch Ness area
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A Second Monster Plan — Tony and Vernon secretly prepare another artificial monster for photography. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon
Location: Loch Ness area
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Many Fake Monsters — They discover locals have independently made fake monsters to attract attention. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon, Harry Sutton
Location: Loch Ness area
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The Speaker Is Found — Locals discover the hidden speaker used to broadcast the monster roars. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon
Location: Loch Ness area
The Creature Appears
The locals discover the speaker and understand that they have been deceived. Tony and Marie flee across the loch, where the real monster finally rises.
Key Events
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The Speaker Is Found — Locals discover the hidden speaker used to broadcast the monster roars. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon
Location: Loch Ness area
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The Hoax Is Exposed — The locals realize that Tony's monster story was a deception. Characters: Tony Blake, Vernon, Harry Sutton
Location: Loch Ness village
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The Mob Gives Chase — An angry mob pursues Tony and Marie after the hoax collapses. Characters: Tony Blake, Marie
Location: Loch Ness shore
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Rowing Across the Loch — Tony and Marie attempt to escape by rowing across the loch. Characters: Tony Blake, Marie
Location: Loch Ness
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The Real Monster Rises — The genuine monster rises from the water as Tony and Marie flee. Characters: Tony Blake, Marie
Location: Loch Ness
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Truth Behind the Hoax — The ending confirms that the fabricated story accidentally concealed a real creature. Characters: Tony Blake, Marie
Location: Loch Ness
A writer attempts to raise some cash by writing a book about the Loch Ness Monster. No publisher will take it because they all think there isn't really a monster. The writer and some of his friends make a fake monster and take photographs and then travel to Scotland to see if they can convince the locals.