Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Marci's Unbelievable Account
In class, Marci describes an extraordinary summer in Buzzsaw and says her stepfather, the mayor, was murdered by his identical twin. She insists that her story is true.
Key Events
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Marci Recounts Her Summer — Miss Clayton asks about summer vacation, and Marci tells an extraordinary story. Characters: Marci Campbell, Miss Clayton
Location: Classroom
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The Mayor's Apparent Murder — Marci says Matt murdered her stepfather, the mayor. Characters: Marci Campbell, Matt Skearns / Peter Van Der Haven
Location: Buzzsaw
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Matt Arrives at the Lumberyard — Marci says the trouble began when Matt arrived at the mayor's lumberyard. Characters: Matt Skearns / Peter Van Der Haven
Location: Mayor's lumberyard
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Marci Calls Bill — Marci asks Bill to come because she believes Matt is returning. Characters: Marci Campbell, Bill Campbell
Location: Not specified
Bill's Troubled Journey
Marci calls Bill for help, and he sets out despite his business commitments. His encounter with Sally leaves him without his car, clothes, or wallet.
Key Events
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Bill Hesitates Over His Deal — Bill initially refuses because he is occupied with a major business deal. Characters: Bill Campbell
Location: Not specified
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Bill Sets Out for Buzzsaw — Bill eventually heads toward town to respond to Marci. Characters: Bill Campbell
Location: Road to Buzzsaw
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Bill Meets Sally — Bill becomes entangled with Sally, a woman on a motorcycle. Characters: Bill Campbell, Sally
Location: Road to Buzzsaw
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Bill Loses His Belongings — Bill loses his car, clothes, and wallet to Sally. Characters: Bill Campbell, Sally
Location: Road to Buzzsaw
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Bill Seeks Police Help — Bill asks the local police for help after losing his belongings. Characters: Bill Campbell, Officer Larry
Location: Local police station
A Town in Confusion
Bill seeks help from an unprepared local police force while trying to recover a phone number essential to his deal. Matt's demand for compensation deepens the conflict, and uncertainty about the twins spreads.
Key Events
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Larry's First Day — Bill learns that Larry is on his first day as a deputy. Characters: Bill Campbell, Officer Larry
Location: Local police station
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The Missing Phone Number — Bill explains the wallet contains a caretaker's number needed for his deal. Characters: Bill Campbell, Officer Larry
Location: Local police station
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Matt Demands Compensation — Matt demands $150,000 for the years he says he served for his twin's crime. Characters: Matt Skearns / Peter Van Der Haven
Location: Buzzsaw
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Sally Witnesses the Reunion — Sally witnesses Matt's dangerous confrontation with the mayor. Characters: Sally, Matt Skearns / Peter Van Der Haven
Location: Buzzsaw
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Confusion Spreads Through Town — Confusion and violence spread as Bill tries to recover his belongings and reach Marci. Characters: Bill Campbell, Matt Skearns / Peter Van Der Haven
Location: Buzzsaw
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The Twins' Identities Blur — It becomes increasingly uncertain which twin is alive. Characters: Bill Campbell, Matt Skearns / Peter Van Der Haven
Location: Buzzsaw
The Passbook Hostage Crisis
At the Van Der Haven house, Matt holds the household at gunpoint and demands the bank passbook. Bill arrives, and the appearance of the supposed victim complicates the already dangerous standoff.
Key Events
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The Household Gathers — Marci and others gather at the Van Der Haven house as danger approaches. Characters: Marci Campbell, Ann Campbell Van Der Haven
Location: Van Der Haven house
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Matt Holds the Family Hostage — Matt holds the household at gunpoint and demands the bank passbook. Characters: Matt Skearns / Peter Van Der Haven, Marci Campbell, Ann Campbell Van Der Haven
Location: Van Der Haven house
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Matt Claims His Debt — Matt says he spent fifteen years in prison for his twin's murder and is owed the money. Characters: Matt Skearns / Peter Van Der Haven, Marci Campbell, Ann Campbell Van Der Haven
Location: Van Der Haven house
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Bill Arrives at the Crisis — Bill arrives while the household remains under threat. Characters: Bill Campbell, Matt Skearns / Peter Van Der Haven, Marci Campbell, Ann Campbell Van Der Haven
Location: Van Der Haven house
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The Supposed Victim Appears — News of the mayor's death arrives, but the supposed victim appears alive; police arrive as the hostage crisis continues. Characters: Bill Campbell, Matt Skearns / Peter Van Der Haven, Marci Campbell, Ann Campbell Van Der Haven, Officer Larry
Location: Van Der Haven house