Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Arrival Under the Desert Sun
Five new prisoners enter a prison where repetitive drills punish service offences. Roberts soon challenges Williams's brutality, exposing the conflict between the prisoners and the camp authorities.
Key Events
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The Desert Glasshouse — Prisoners endure repetitive drill in the blazing desert heat.
Location: British Army prison in the Libyan desert
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Five Prisoners Arrive — The arrival of five prisoners unsettles the prison's existing order. Characters: Joe Roberts, Jock McGrath, George Stevens, Monty Bartlett, Jacko King
Location: The glasshouse
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Roberts Challenges Williams — Roberts openly challenges Williams's brutal treatment of prisoners. Characters: Joe Roberts, Staff Sergeant Williams
Location: The glasshouse
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The RSM's Discipline — Wilson backs a harsh approach while regarding Harris as too lenient. Characters: R.S.M. Wilson, Staff Sergeant Williams, Harris
Location: The glasshouse
A Punishment Turns Fatal
Williams targets Stevens and Bartlett as weak prisoners. Stevens dies after being driven to repeat runs up the artificial hill, prompting Roberts and King to accuse Williams and protest.
Key Events
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Williams Seeks Promotion — Williams's ambition is evident as he seeks to impress the RSM. Characters: Staff Sergeant Williams, R.S.M. Wilson
Location: The glasshouse
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The Drinking Contest — Williams attempts to impress Wilson with a late-night drinking contest. Characters: Staff Sergeant Williams, R.S.M. Wilson
Location: The glasshouse
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Weak Prisoners Targeted — Williams singles out Stevens and Bartlett as the weakest prisoners. Characters: Staff Sergeant Williams, George Stevens, Monty Bartlett
Location: The glasshouse
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Stevens Dies on the Hill — Stevens dies after Williams pushes his repeated hill runs beyond endurance. Characters: Staff Sergeant Williams, George Stevens
Location: The artificial hill in the camp
Authority Answers Resistance
Wilson confronts the protesting prisoners, while Williams beats Roberts and Wilson denies him medical treatment. King rejects the uniform and discipline after Wilson racially abuses him.
Key Events
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Prisoners Protest — Roberts accuses Williams of murder, with King supporting him. Characters: Joe Roberts, Jacko King, R.S.M. Wilson
Location: The glasshouse
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Wilson Faces the Prisoners — Wilson confronts the protesting prison population. Characters: R.S.M. Wilson, Joe Roberts, Jacko King
Location: The glasshouse
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Williams Beats Roberts — Williams gangs up on Roberts and beats him, breaking his foot. Characters: Staff Sergeant Williams, Joe Roberts
Location: An empty cell
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Medical Treatment Refused — Wilson prevents Roberts from receiving treatment and forces him to drill. Characters: Staff Sergeant Williams, R.S.M. Wilson, Joe Roberts, The Medical Officer
Location: The glasshouse
A Report and a Final Assault
Wilson pressures the Medical Officer over Stevens's fitness for punishment, but the officer and Harris agree to report Wilson and Williams. Williams then attacks Roberts again, and King and McGrath intervene as Roberts pleads for them to stop.
Key Events
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King Rejects Discipline — King refuses his uniform and army discipline after Wilson racially abuses him. Characters: Jacko King, R.S.M. Wilson
Location: The glasshouse
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Abuse Report Considered — After Wilson pressures the Medical Officer, he and Harris agree to report Wilson and Williams. Characters: R.S.M. Wilson, The Medical Officer, Harris, Staff Sergeant Williams
Location: The glasshouse
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Final Attack on Williams — King and McGrath attack Williams as Roberts pleads with them to stop. Characters: Joe Roberts, Staff Sergeant Williams, Jacko King, Jock McGrath
Location: A cell in the glasshouse