Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Divine Law and Human Fallibility
The prologue establishes the biblical origin of the Commandments through Moses. After receiving divine law, the Israelites immediately rebel by worshipping a golden calf, prompting Moses to destroy the tablets.
Key Events
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Prologue Opening Statement — Opening statement explains modern society mocked Judeo-Christian morality until WWI. Characters: Moses - The Lawgiver
Location: Narrative Frame
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Crossing of the Red Sea — Israelites flee Egypt and successfully cross the Red Sea. Characters: Moses - The Lawgiver
Location: Red Sea
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Commandments Revealed — Moses witnesses the Commandments written in the sky and carves them into stone. Characters: Moses - The Lawgiver
Location: Mount Sinai
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Golden Calf Worship — Israelites fall into debauchery and build a golden calf to worship. Location: Desert Camp
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Moses Smashes Tablets — Moses furiously smashes the stone tablets, deeming the Israelites unworthy. Characters: Moses - The Lawgiver
Location: Desert Camp
Fractured Brotherhood
The narrative shifts to modern times, introducing the McTavish family. John embraces religious dogma while Dan rejects it, leading to his eviction and a chance encounter with Mary Leigh.
Key Events
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Moses Smashes Tablets — Moses furiously smashes the stone tablets, deeming the Israelites unworthy. Characters: Moses - The Lawgiver
Location: Desert Camp
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Dathan and Miriam Seduce — Dathan and Miriam seduce each other, horrified by her hideous sores. Characters: Dathan - The Discontented, Miriam - the Sister of Moses: Prologue
Location: Desert Camp
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Lightning Destroys Calf — Moses calls on God's power and lightning destroys the golden calf. Characters: Moses - The Lawgiver
Location: Desert Camp
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Brothers Diverge — John follows Commandments; Dan becomes an atheist vowing to break them. Characters: Mrs. Martha McTavish
Location: McTavish House
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Dan Evicted — Martha evicts Dan from her house due to his atheism and rejection of the Commandments. Characters: Mrs. Martha McTavish
Location: McTavish House
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Mary Steals Sandwich — Impoverished Mary steals a bite of Dan's sandwich, triggering a madcap chase. Location: Lunch Wagon
Corruption and Consequence
Dan and Mary's romance faces Sabbath friction, causing them to elope. Dan rises to wealth through corrupt construction practices, but a catastrophic wall collapse fatally injures his mother.
Key Events
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Mary Steals Sandwich — Impoverished Mary steals a bite of Dan's sandwich, triggering a madcap chase. Location: Lunch Wagon
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Mary Takes Refuge — John convinces Martha to take Mary in; Dan stays and meets Mary. Characters: Mrs. Martha McTavish
Location: McTavish House
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Sabbath Friction — Martha's strict Sabbath observance clashes with Dan and Mary dancing. Characters: Mrs. Martha McTavish
Location: McTavish House
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Couple Runs Off — Dan and Mary decide to run off together after Sabbath conflict. Location: Road
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Dan's Corruption — Three years later, Dan becomes a corrupt contractor building a cathedral. Location: City
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Wall Collapse — A wall collapses on Martha, fatally injuring her. Characters: Mrs. Martha McTavish
Location: Construction Site
Descent into Ruin and Grace
Facing financial ruin and a leprosy threat, Dan attempts suicide and kills his mistress before crashing his boat. Mary visits John, where a divine light reveals her hands are healed.
Key Events
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Wall Collapse — A wall collapses on Martha, fatally injuring her. Characters: Mrs. Martha McTavish
Location: Construction Site
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Martha's Last Words — Martha tells Dan she spent too much time teaching fear, not love, of God. Characters: Mrs. Martha McTavish
Location: Construction Site
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Suicide Attempt — Dan attempts suicide when threatened by a muckraker tabloid. Location: Office
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Sally's Leprosy Reveal — Sally reveals she is infected with leprosy from a contraband shipment. Location: Sally's Apartment
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Dan Kills Sally — In a rage, Dan kills Sally after learning about the infection. Location: Sally's Apartment
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Boat Crash — Dan flees on a motorboat, crashes into a rocky island, and dies. Location: Rocky Island
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Mary's Fear and Visit — Mary fears infection and visits John to say goodbye. Location: John's Office
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Light Reveals Healing — A light shows Mary's hands are unscarred; her perceived scars disappear. Location: John's Office
The first part tells the story of Moses leading the Jews from Egypt to the Promised Land, his receipt of the tablets and the worship of the golden calf. The second part shows the efficacy of the commandments in modern life through a story set in San Francisco. Two brothers, rivals for the love of Mary, also come into conflict when John discovers Dan used shoddy materials to construct a cathedral.