Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Pregnancy Behind Bars
Marie enters prison after a failed robbery and discovers that she is pregnant. Kitty introduces her to the prison's criminal survival code.
Key Events
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Robbery Goes Wrong — Marie participates in a botched armed robbery; her husband Tom is killed. Characters: Marie Allen
Location: Robbery site
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Marie Enters Prison — Nineteen-year-old Marie is sent to prison after the failed robbery. Characters: Marie Allen
Location: Women's prison
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Pregnancy Revealed — Marie learns during her initial physical examination that she is two months pregnant. Characters: Marie Allen
Location: Prison examination room
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Prison Routine Begins — Marie struggles with the monotonous and cutthroat prison environment under Harper's rule. Characters: Marie Allen, Evelyn Harper
Location: Women's prison
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Kitty Offers Training — Kitty promises Marie future work as a thief and stresses the value of toughness. Characters: Marie Allen, Kitty Stark
Location: Prison ward
Hope Without Release
Marie initially believes parole may come soon. The sight of prisoners trapped by unemployment and one prisoner's suicide destroys much of that hope.
Key Events
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Parole Seems Possible — Marie is informed that she may be paroled in ten months. Characters: Marie Allen
Location: Prison office
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Parolees Remain Locked Up — Marie sees approved parolees remain imprisoned because their officers cannot secure employment. Characters: Marie Allen
Location: Prison
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A Prisoner Hangs Herself — A hopeless prisoner hangs herself, diminishing Marie's faith in early release. Characters: Marie Allen
Location: Women's prison
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Premature Birth — Despite prison rules, Marie gives birth to a healthy but premature baby. Characters: Marie Allen
Location: Prison medical area
Motherhood Taken Away
Marie gives birth and tries to arrange temporary custody for her baby. Family rejection, parole denial, and forced adoption deepen her despair.
Key Events
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Premature Birth — Despite prison rules, Marie gives birth to a healthy but premature baby. Characters: Marie Allen
Location: Prison medical area
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Custody Plan Fails — Marie plans temporary custody with her mother, but her stepfather rejects the baby. Characters: Marie Allen
Location: Prison
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Parole Is Denied — Marie is denied parole and makes a half-hearted escape attempt. Characters: Marie Allen
Location: Prison office
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Child Taken For Adoption — Authorities force Marie to surrender her child for adoption. Characters: Marie Allen
Location: Women's prison
Riot Against Authority
Elvira's arrival intensifies the conflict among the prisoners and Harper. The struggle over Marie's kitten ends in a riot, punishment, and the kitten's death.
Key Events
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Elvira Enters Prison — Elvira's arrival creates rivalry with Kitty, and she bribes Harper to isolate Kitty. Characters: Kitty Stark, Elvira Powell, Evelyn Harper
Location: Women's prison
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Kitty Is Beaten — Kitty is placed in solitary confinement and beaten. Characters: Kitty Stark, Evelyn Harper
Location: Solitary confinement
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Marie Adopts A Kitten — Marie adopts a kitten found in the prison yard, but Harper tries to take it away. Characters: Marie Allen, Evelyn Harper
Location: Prison yard
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Prison Riot Erupts — Harper's attempt to remove the kitten prompts a riot, during which the kitten is accidentally killed. Characters: Marie Allen, Evelyn Harper
Location: Prison yard
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Marie Loses Her Hair — Harper shaves Marie's head and sends her toward solitary confinement after the riot. Characters: Marie Allen, Evelyn Harper
Location: Solitary-confinement area
Violence And Return
Benton challenges Harper's authority while Kitty returns from solitary confinement psychologically damaged. Kitty kills Harper, and Marie embraces a criminal future with Elvira's gang.
Key Events
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Benton Challenges Harper — Benton confronts the institutional response to Marie's punishment and threatens a public hearing. Characters: Marie Allen, Ruth Benton, Evelyn Harper
Location: Prison administration
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Kitty Returns Unstable — Kitty returns after a month in solitary, mentally unstable and harassed by Harper. Characters: Marie Allen, Kitty Stark, Evelyn Harper
Location: Prison cafeteria
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Harper Is Stabbed — Kitty stabs Harper to death while inmates watch; Marie encourages the assault. Characters: Marie Allen, Kitty Stark, Evelyn Harper
Location: Prison cafeteria
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Marie Fakes Employment — Marie claims to have secured a job, but the job is a ruse for joining Elvira's shoplifting gang. Characters: Marie Allen, Elvira Powell
Location: Prison office
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Marie Leaves Hardened — Marie leaves as a cynical criminal, and Benton orders that her file remain active because she will return. Characters: Marie Allen, Ruth Benton
Location: Prison administration office