Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Awkward Beginnings
A childhood fear frames the opening before Cherie and Jimmy's private outing is interrupted. Their relationship continues through awkward encounters and jealous misunderstandings.
Key Events
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A Frightening Childhood Tale — An opening tale about a woman luring children recalls a story that once frightened Cherie. Characters: Cherie
Location: Unspecified
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Interrupted Secluded Visit — A police officer interrupts Cherie and Jimmy's attempt at intimacy. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy, Police Officer
Location: A secluded spot
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Jealous Misunderstandings — Awkward encounters and jealous misunderstandings complicate the couple's relationship. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Unspecified
Small Tests of Trust
A dispute involving their dog turns into an argument over blame and compensation. The conflict shows how minor problems can become tests of trust between Cherie and Jimmy.
Key Events
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The Dogs' Dispute — After their dog mates with another dog, Cherie and Jimmy argue over blame and compensation. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Unspecified
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An Unexpected Visitor — An unexpected female visitor arrives, raising disagreement about hosting her. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Their home
Home and Old Habits
An unexpected visitor raises tension about the couple's living arrangements and their promise to host her. Cherie and Jimmy revert to their familiar method of handling disagreements.
Key Events
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A Disagreement Over Hosting — Jimmy worries about the visitor affecting their living arrangements; Cherie insists they honor their offer. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Their home
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Old Habits Return — The couple falls back on its familiar way of resolving disagreements rather than finding an easy compromise. Characters: Cherie, Jimmy
Location: Unspecified
A Father's Example
Cherie's Father reflects on failed relationships and his tendency to avoid difficult situations. His history offers a cautionary example as Cherie's own doubts deepen.
Key Events
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A Father's Failed Relationships — Cherie's Father reflects on failed relationships and avoiding difficult situations. Characters: Cherie
Location: Unspecified
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Seeking a Definite Answer — As her doubts grow, Cherie seeks an answer about whether to break up with Jimmy. Characters: Cherie
Location: Unspecified
Facing the Choice
Cherie seeks certainty about whether she should leave Jimmy, but is told the odds are even and the choice is hers. Her father urges her to face the problem and choose a life that can make her happy, without dictating the outcome.
Key Events
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Evenly Balanced Odds — A calculating voice says the odds are even and that the choice belongs to Cherie. Characters: Cherie
Location: Unspecified
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Returning to a Place of Love — Cherie returns to a meaningful place, where her father speaks honestly about his mistakes. Characters: Cherie, Cherie
Location: A place tied to Cherie's first awareness of love
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Choosing to Face the Problem — Her father urges Cherie to face her problems and choose a happy life, whether or not she stays with Jimmy. Characters: Cherie, Cherie
Location: A place tied to Cherie's first awareness of love
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The Choice Remains Hers — The story ends without predicting Cherie's choice or offering an easy solution. Characters: Cherie
Location: Unspecified