Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Stenographer's Disillusionment
Walden works quietly in Judge Boyle's courtroom and witnesses a horrific criminal case. A terminal brain tumor and a painful meeting with his father leave him questioning the value of his remaining life.
Key Events
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Walden In The Courtroom — Walden performs his quiet stenographer duties during Judge Boyle's courtroom proceedings. Characters: Walden Dean, Judge Boyle
Location: Courtroom
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The Horrific Trial — Walden hears the case involving a father who raped and burned his daughter. Characters: Walden Dean, Judge Boyle
Location: Courtroom
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Terminal Diagnosis — After fainting at work, Walden learns that he has a potentially terminal brain tumor. Characters: Walden Dean
Location: Medical office
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Rejecting The Surgery — Walden declines surgery and struggles over whether medication would only prolong the inevitable. Characters: Walden Dean
Location: Medical office
Violence Finds A Purpose
Walden unexpectedly attacks a robber and discovers a capacity for violence. Learning that the courtroom defendant has been released, he begins killing people whose crimes escaped punishment.
Key Events
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A Painful Father Meeting — Walden's father dismisses his stenography legacy and urges him to find a better purpose. Characters: Walden Dean
Location: Father's home
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Bottle At The Store — Walden stops a robber by smashing a whiskey bottle over the robber's head. Characters: Walden Dean, Detective Bill Kane
Location: Convenience store
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The Police Statement — Bill meets Walden after the store attack and asks him to come to the station to give a statement. Characters: Walden Dean, Detective Bill Kane
Location: Police station
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A Killer Released — Walden learns that the accused rapist was released on a technicality and remains unrepentant. Characters: Walden Dean, Judge Boyle
Location: Police station
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The Oven Execution — Walden ambushes the released defendant and burns him to death in the new oven. Characters: Walden Dean
Location: Defendant's house
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The Nursing Home Murder — Walden murders a nursing home worker who had tortured and killed vulnerable clients. Characters: Walden Dean
Location: Nursing home
The Woods Keep Their Secret
The police investigate missing boys, a recovered body, and unusual fabric evidence. Walden helps correct a wrongful arrest, leading the investigation to a remote house filled with the victims' bodies.
Key Events
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A Body In The Woods — A missing boy's body is found, and Walden glimpses unusual fabric at the crime scene. Characters: Walden Dean, Detective Bill Kane
Location: Woods
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The Wrong Arrest — Bill arrests a mentally handicapped local man, but the investigation finds no evidence against him. Characters: Detective Bill Kane
Location: Local neighborhood
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Walden Defends The Innocent — Walden objects to the arrest and convinces Bill that the local man is innocent. Characters: Walden Dean, Detective Bill Kane
Location: Police station
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House In The Woods — The investigation reaches a remote house containing the fossilized bodies of missing boys. Characters: Detective Bill Kane
Location: House in the woods
Blood And Recovery
Walden intervenes when two women are about to be sexually assaulted and is seriously injured during the confrontation. He survives, receives treatment, and has his tumor removed.
Key Events
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The Assault Interruption — Walden confronts two men attempting to sexually assault two women. Characters: Walden Dean
Location: Street
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Walden Is Shot — One attacker stabs Walden, and Walden shoots both attackers before being taken to hospital. Characters: Walden Dean
Location: Street
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Tumor Surgery — Walden receives treatment and finally has the brain tumor removed. Characters: Walden Dean
Location: Hospital
The Judge Unmasked
A missing piece of fabric on Boyle's antique car connects the judge to the murders. Boyle confesses, Walden forces his suicide, and Walden ends by examining new cases for future vigilante action.
Key Events
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The Fabric Clue — After Boyle visits, Walden notices matching fabric missing from the judge's antique car. Characters: Walden Dean, Judge Boyle
Location: Walden's home
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Boyle's Confession — Boyle admits that he has killed countless children since he was seventeen. Characters: Walden Dean, Judge Boyle
Location: Judge Boyle's home
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A New Vigilante List — Bill and Walden's recovery concludes with Walden reviewing criminals who escaped justice. Characters: Walden Dean, Detective Bill Kane
Location: Walden's home