Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Warning at the Door
Jeri warns Gloria that a mob hit threatens her family. Gloria reluctantly accepts responsibility for protecting the children and the ledger.
Key Events
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Groceries in the South Bronx — Jeri walks home with groceries through the South Bronx. Characters: Jeri Dawn
Location: South Bronx apartment building
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The Strange Man in the Lobby — Jeri passes a strangely dressed man before quickly boarding the elevator. Characters: Jeri Dawn
Location: Apartment building lobby
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A Warning at Home — Jeri learns that a contract threatens her family because of an informant connection. Characters: Jeri Dawn
Location: Dawn apartment
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Gloria Answers the Door — Gloria arrives to borrow coffee while Jeri urgently explains the danger. Characters: Gloria Swenson, Jeri Dawn
Location: Dawn apartment doorway
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A Reluctant Promise — Gloria dislikes children but agrees to protect them from the impending hit. Characters: Gloria Swenson, Jeri Dawn
Location: Dawn apartment
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The Locked Bathroom — One child refuses to leave and locks themselves inside the bathroom. Characters: Gloria Swenson, Jeri Dawn
Location: Dawn apartment
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Ledger and Child Removed — Gloria carries a child and the incriminating ledger to her apartment. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Apartment building
Flight Through Manhattan
After the apartment attack, Gloria escapes with the child while police and reporters surround the building. Their hiding place becomes unsafe when the newspapers expose their identities.
Key Events
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The Apartment Hit — Loud shotgun blasts signal the hit squad's attack inside the apartment. Characters: Jeri Dawn
Location: Dawn apartment
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Police Enter the Building — Gloria leaves with the child as police enter carrying heavy weapons. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Apartment building entrance
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Escape Through the Crowd — Reporters and onlookers gather as a cameraman photographs Gloria leaving. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Street outside the apartment building
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Cab to Manhattan — Gloria takes a cab into Manhattan to hide from the mob. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: New York City taxi
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Empty Apartment Hideout — Gloria and the child hide overnight in a friend's empty apartment. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Empty Manhattan apartment
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The Newspaper Photograph — The child discovers their photograph in newspapers, and television reports an alleged abduction. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Manhattan apartment
The Mob Closes In
Gangsters demand the child and ledger, forcing Gloria into a violent street escape. She decides that remaining in New York is impossible.
Key Events
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Gangsters Close In — Gangsters confront Gloria and demand the child and the incriminating ledger. Characters: Gloria Swenson, 1st Man / Gangster
Location: Manhattan sidewalk
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The Flipped Gangster Car — Gloria fires at the gangsters' car, which takes off and flips over. Characters: Gloria Swenson, 1st Man / Gangster
Location: Manhattan street
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Leaving New York — Gloria realizes that survival requires leaving New York. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: New York City
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The Safe Deposit Box — Gloria goes to the bank and empties her safe deposit box. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Bank
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Night at the Flophouse — Gloria and the child settle for the night in a flophouse. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Flophouse
Guilt and Rescue
Gloria considers sending the child away, then returns after abandoning the plan. She rescues the captured child and reaches a hotel after another dangerous escape.
Key Events
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Restaurant Negotiation — Gloria offers the ledger in exchange for immunity, but is told only Tanzini can approve it. Characters: Gloria Swenson, 1st Man / Gangster
Location: Restaurant
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Gloria Disarms the Goons — Gloria disarms the men and escapes after the immunity request fails. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Restaurant
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The Boarding School Plan — Gloria says she plans to send the child away to boarding school. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Temporary lodging
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Guilt and Capture — After abandoning the child, Gloria feels guilty and returns, discovering the child has been captured. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: New York City streets
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Rescue and Subway Escape — Gloria rescues the child, kills one mobster, and escapes through a taxi and subway. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Taxi and subway
Ledger and Reunion
Gloria confronts Tanzini, relinquishes the ledger, and survives an attack during her escape. The child travels toward safety before the two reunite at a cemetery.
Key Events
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Gloria Reveals Her Past — Gloria explains the mob's reach and reveals that she was once Tanzini's mistress. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Hotel room
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The Final Ledger Exchange — Gloria gives Tanzini the ledger, escapes, and survives an attack on her elevator car. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Tanzini's meeting place
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Railway Flight to Pittsburgh — The child waits several hours before fleeing to Pittsburgh by rail. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Railway station and train
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Cemetery Reunion — Gloria, disguised as the child's grandmother, arrives by limousine and reunites with the child. Characters: Gloria Swenson
Location: Cemetery