Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Scientist's Impossible Choice
Neil establishes his scientific reputation and receives major funding for his time machine. Mega then orders him to abandon it for an anti-matter bomb project.
Key Events
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Satellite Crisis Averted — Neil rapidly reprograms an off-course satellite and prevents a disaster threatening Los Angeles. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: Mega Corporation
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Time Machine Grant — Neil's reputation helps secure twenty million dollars for his time machine project. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: Mega Corporation
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Weapon Assignment — Mega orders Neil to suspend the time machine and begin work on an anti-matter bomb. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: Mega Corporation laboratory
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Power Module Completed — The unexpectedly early power-module completion makes a time-machine test possible. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: Neil's laboratory
Escapes Across History
Neil tests the machine and becomes trapped in Salem during the witch trials. He later survives arrest and danger during the California Gold Rush.
Key Events
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First Time Departure — Neil begins his weekend experiments by traveling through time and space. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: Neil's laboratory
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Salem Witchcraft Arrest — Neil is caught during the Salem witch trials and found guilty of witchcraft. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: Salem, Massachusetts, 1692
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Stake Escape — Tied to the machine and sentenced to burning, Neil frees himself and escapes. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: Salem, Massachusetts
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Gold Rush Detour — Neil detours into the California Gold Rush to avoid a time warp. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: California, 1871
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Miner Arrest — Miners mistake Neil for a thief, shoot at him, and have him arrested. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: California gold fields
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Bank Robbery Escape — A bank robbery distracts the authorities, allowing Neil to escape through his ingenuity. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: California gold-rush settlement
A Future Burned Away
After returning to the present, Neil learns that Mega's weapons have catastrophic environmental consequences. He travels forward and witnesses radiation, destruction, and nature reclaiming the wasteland.
Key Events
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Return To The Laboratory — Neil returns to the present after surviving his first sequence of historical travels. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: Neil's laboratory
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Environmental Warning — Neil receives a chilling report about the environmental effects of Mega's weapons. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: Mega Corporation
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Journey Into The Future — Neil travels into the future to test the report's projections and seek proof of devastation. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: Future Earth
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Radiated Salt Flats — Neil observes elevated radiation levels on a landscape resembling desert salt flats. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: Desert salt flats, October 2025
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Civilization Burns — Neil witnesses the fiery destruction of civilization and the return of nature over the wasteland. Characters: Neil Perry
Location: Future Earth
The Eloi's Hidden War
Neil meets Weena and learns how humanity divided into Eloi and Morlocks. A technology museum reveals that his assigned weapon will directly cause the world's destruction.
Key Events
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Eloi And Morlocks — Weena explains how surface-dwelling Eloi and underground Morlocks emerged after humanity divided. Characters: Neil Perry, Weena
Location: Eloi habitat
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Museum Weapon Revelation — A museum identifies a weapon designed by Neil and reveals his assignment caused global destruction. Characters: Neil Perry, Weena, Ariel
Location: Technology museum
Choosing A Different Future
Neil and Ariel seal the Morlock entrances with plastic explosives. Neil and Agnes reject Mega's agenda, and Neil returns to Weena and the liberated Eloi.
Key Events
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Morlock Entrances Sealed — Neil and Ariel use museum explosives to seal the three entrances used by the Morlocks. Characters: Neil Perry, Weena, Ariel
Location: Eloi habitat entrances
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Executives Reject Warning — Neil presents his report, but Mega's leadership prefers military advantage and scientific control. Characters: Neil Perry, Agnes
Location: Mega Corporation
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Departure From Mega — Neil leaves Mega, while Agnes resigns after rejecting the executives' plans. Characters: Neil Perry, Agnes
Location: Mega Corporation
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Return To The Eloi — Neil returns to Weena and the Eloi after the Morlock entrances have been sealed. Characters: Neil Perry, Weena, Ariel
Location: Eloi habitat