Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Marks Beneath The Uncertainty
Joanne experiences lapses, unexplained sensations, and a strange mark. Brian worries about her condition, while a doctor finds no immediate explanation and recommends further tests.
Key Events
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Disturbing Lapses Begin — Joanne experiences disturbing lapses and unexplained sensations. Characters: Joanne
Location: Unspecified
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Found Sleeping Outdoors — Joanne apparently falls asleep outdoors and Brian finds her. Characters: Joanne, Brian
Location: Outdoors
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Brian Raises Medical Concern — Brian worries that Joanne may have a neurological problem. Characters: Joanne, Brian
Location: Joanne's family home
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Joanne Denies Sleeping — Joanne insists that she was only sleeping despite the strange episode. Characters: Joanne, Brian
Location: Joanne's family home
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The Strange Body Mark — A strange mark on Joanne's side deepens her unease. Characters: Joanne
Location: Joanne's family home
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Doctor Finds Nothing — A doctor finds no immediate explanation for Joanne's condition. Characters: Joanne
Location: Doctor's office
Witnesses Of The Impossible
Joanne attends a gathering for people who report UFO or alien encounters. Abraham describes lost hours, Joanne recounts floating, and their matching marks connect their experiences.
Key Events
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Doctor Finds Nothing — A doctor finds no immediate explanation for Joanne's condition. Characters: Joanne
Location: Doctor's office
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MRI Tests Suggested — The doctor suggests further tests, including an MRI. Characters: Joanne
Location: Doctor's office
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UFO Witness Gathering — Joanne attends a gathering for people reporting UFO or alien encounters. Characters: Joanne, Abraham
Location: UFO witness gathering
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Abraham Describes Lost Hours — Abraham describes losing several hours after a strange light appeared on a rooftop. Characters: Abraham
Location: UFO witness gathering
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Joanne Recalls Floating — Joanne shares that she once saw herself floating across her living room. Characters: Joanne
Location: Joanne's living room
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Matching Marks Revealed — Joanne discovers that Abraham has the same unusual mark. Characters: Joanne, Abraham
Location: UFO witness gathering
The Alexandria Hypothesis
Joanne and Abraham exchange contact information and investigate an ancient Egyptian scroll. Abraham links the scroll to Alexandria and the coincidences surrounding their experiences.
Key Events
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Contacts Exchanged — Joanne and Abraham exchange contact information to pursue an explanation. Characters: Joanne, Abraham
Location: UFO witness gathering
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Ancient Scroll Report — Their investigation leads to reports of an ancient Egyptian scroll discovered by the Brooklyn Museum. Characters: Joanne, Abraham
Location: Research materials
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Alexandria Connection Proposed — Abraham suspects the scroll may connect to Alexandria and their strange coincidences. Characters: Abraham, Joanne
Location: Research materials
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Books Borrowed For Research — Joanne and Abraham borrow books about Alexandria and the Pharaoh's lighthouse. Characters: Joanne, Abraham
Location: Library
Tracks Through The Library
The pair borrows books about Alexandria and the Pharaoh's lighthouse. Their unusual research attracts attention, and Steve becomes curious before returning to the library for a notebook and information.
Key Events
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Librarian Notices Pair — An information librarian remembers Joanne and Abraham as an odd couple. Characters: Joanne, Abraham
Location: Library
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Steve Investigates Their Activities — Steve becomes curious about Joanne and Abraham's activities. Characters: Steve
Location: Library
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Notebook Search In Library — Steve returns to recover a notebook and search for information, involving Miriam. Characters: Steve, Miriam
Location: Library
The Government Agent's Accusation
Steve appears at Joanne's family home under the name Schwartzbaum and claims official authority. He links Abraham to criminal activity, searches for clues, and leaves Joanne's fate unresolved.
Key Events
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Schwartzbaum Arrives — Steve appears under the name Schwartzbaum and claims to be a government agent. Characters: Steve, Brian, Joanne
Location: Joanne's family home
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Abraham Branded Criminal — Steve tells Brian and the family that Abraham is suspected of smuggling a rare document. Characters: Steve, Brian, Joanne
Location: Joanne's family home
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House Search For Clues — Steve asks to inspect Joanne's belongings and secretly searches the house. Characters: Steve, Brian, Joanne
Location: Joanne's family home
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Unresolved Criminal Threat — Steve claims Joanne may be about to commit a serious crime, leaving the mystery unresolved. Characters: Steve, Brian, Joanne
Location: Joanne's family home