Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Secretary's Ambition
Tess seeks advancement but is humiliated and fired after confronting the culture at her stockbroker firm. She then obtains a new position at Petty Marsh.
Key Events
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Tess Pursues Advancement — Tess dreams of becoming an executive after earning a business degree through night school. Characters: Tess McGill
Location: Staten Island and Manhattan
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Secretary Humiliation — Tess is treated dismissively despite her intelligence and business instincts. Characters: Tess McGill
Location: Stockbroker firm
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Tess Loses Her Job — Tess posts an angry message about her boss and is fired. Characters: Tess McGill
Location: Stockbroker firm
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New Administrative Position — Tess becomes Katharine's administrative assistant at the mergers-and-acquisitions firm. Characters: Tess McGill, Katharine Parker
Location: Petty Marsh
The Stolen Proposal
Tess develops a radio-network acquisition proposal and initially receives encouragement from Katharine. While house-sitting, she discovers that Katharine plans to claim the idea.
Key Events
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New Administrative Position — Tess becomes Katharine's administrative assistant at the mergers-and-acquisitions firm. Characters: Tess McGill, Katharine Parker
Location: Petty Marsh
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The Radio Network Idea — Tess shares her proposal to have Trask Industries purchase a radio network. Characters: Tess McGill, Katharine Parker
Location: Katharine's office
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Katharine Rejects Proposal — Katharine insists that Tess's proposed purchase will not work. Characters: Tess McGill, Katharine Parker
Location: Petty Marsh
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Katharine's Skiing Injury — After Katharine breaks her leg skiing, she asks Tess to house-sit. Characters: Tess McGill, Katharine Parker
Location: Hospital and Katharine's apartment
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The Stolen Idea Revealed — Tess finds notes showing Katharine intends to claim the Trask idea as her own. Characters: Tess McGill, Katharine Parker
Location: Katharine's apartment
A Risky New Identity
After ending her failed relationship, Tess uses Katharine's clothes and Cyn's help to appear more executive-like. She enters a business dinner and unknowingly meets Jack.
Key Events
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Tess Ends Her Relationship — Tess discovers her live-in boyfriend with another woman and dumps him. Characters: Tess McGill
Location: Tess's apartment
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Cyn Creates A Makeover — Cyn helps Tess create a more professional appearance for the merger meetings. Characters: Tess McGill, Cyn
Location: Tess's apartment
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Dinner Before The Meeting — Tess attends a business dinner and meets Jack without knowing his identity. Characters: Tess McGill, Jack Trainer
Location: Dinner venue
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Jack Offers Shelter — Tess passes out after combining Valium and alcohol, and Jack takes her to his apartment. Characters: Tess McGill, Jack Trainer
Location: Taxi and Jack's apartment
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The Meeting Identity Twist — Tess recognizes Jack as the associate she is scheduled to meet, and both pretend not to recognize each other. Characters: Tess McGill, Jack Trainer
Location: Business meeting
Love And Professional Stakes
Jack joins Tess in preparing the merger financials, and their presentation to Trask succeeds. Their intimacy is complicated when Tess learns about Jack's relationship with Katharine.
Key Events
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Financials Prepared Together — Jack reassures Tess and works with her to prepare the merger financials. Characters: Tess McGill, Jack Trainer
Location: Tess's office
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Trask Presentation Succeeds — Tess and Jack successfully present the radio acquisition proposal to Trask. Characters: Tess McGill, Jack Trainer
Location: Trask Industries meeting
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Tess And Jack Become Intimate — Tess and Jack celebrate the successful presentation by acting on their attraction. Characters: Tess McGill, Jack Trainer
Location: Tess's apartment
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Jack's Connection To Katharine — Tess learns that Jack has been involved with Katharine and planned to end that relationship. Characters: Tess McGill, Jack Trainer, Katharine Parker
Location: Tess's apartment
The Truth Takes The Floor
Katharine exposes Tess at the merger meeting, but Tess later identifies a business risk and explains the proposal's true origin. Katharine is fired, while Tess earns a position at Trask Industries.
Key Events
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Katharine Returns Home — Katharine returns, discusses the merger, calls Jack, and discovers Tess's notebook. Characters: Tess McGill, Katharine Parker, Jack Trainer
Location: Katharine's apartment
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Katharine Exposes Tess — Katharine identifies Tess as her secretary and accuses her of stealing the merger idea. Characters: Tess McGill, Jack Trainer, Katharine Parker
Location: Merger meeting
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Tess Returns To Petty Marsh — Tess returns to clear out her desk but encounters Jack, Katharine, Trask, and the board. Characters: Tess McGill, Jack Trainer, Katharine Parker
Location: Petty Marsh
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Tess Defends The Merger — Tess identifies a merger risk and explains the idea's inspiration in an elevator pitch. Characters: Tess McGill, Jack Trainer, Katharine Parker
Location: Petty Marsh elevator and offices
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Tess Earns Her New Career — Tess gets a job at Trask Industries, moves in with Jack, and calls Cyn with the news. Characters: Tess McGill, Jack Trainer, Cyn
Location: Trask Industries office