Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Script Finds a Producer
Marvin struggles to get by making instructional videos until Jack Roth reads an old screenplay and offers to seek financing. Roth assembles three prospective backers, whose conditions begin to reshape the project.
Key Events
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Marvin Makes Instructional Videos — A financially struggling Marvin works on cheaply made instructional videos. Characters: Marvin Landisman
Location: Hollywood
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Roth Reads the Old Script — Roth reads Marvin's years-old screenplay and offers to help find investors. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Jack Roth
Location: Hollywood
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Three Backers Join the Project — Roth brings together three men willing to finance Marvin's film. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Jack Roth, Evan M. Wright, Carmine Rasso, George Lieberhof
Location: Hollywood
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Casting Conditions Emerge — Each investor insists that his mistress be cast as a condition of backing. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Evan M. Wright, Carmine Rasso, George Lieberhof
Location: Unspecified meeting place
Casting Demands Take Hold
The investors require roles for their mistresses in exchange for their money. Marvin keeps revising his screenplay, while the production brings Beverly, Patricia, and Peggy into the film's orbit.
Key Events
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Casting Conditions Emerge — Each investor insists that his mistress be cast as a condition of backing. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Evan M. Wright, Carmine Rasso, George Lieberhof
Location: Unspecified meeting place
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Three Actresses Enter the Picture — The investors' casting demands bring Beverly, Patricia, and Peggy into the production. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Beverly Dumont, Patricia Riley, Peggy Pauline
Location: Film project
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Marvin Revises the Screenplay — Marvin repeatedly changes the script to accommodate the backers' demands. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Jack Roth
Location: Hollywood
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Stuart Is Hired to Adapt — Roth hires Stuart to adapt the script around the investors' mistresses. Characters: Jack Roth, Marvin Landisman, Stuart Stratland Jr.
Location: Film project
The Script Comes Apart
Roth hires Stuart to adapt Marvin's screenplay, and Stuart's proposed changes repeatedly provoke Marvin. Stuart also begins an affair with Peggy as the script moves farther from its original form.
Key Events
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Stuart Is Hired to Adapt — Roth hires Stuart to adapt the script around the investors' mistresses. Characters: Jack Roth, Marvin Landisman, Stuart Stratland Jr.
Location: Film project
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The Adaptation Angers Marvin — Stuart's proposed changes repeatedly enrage Marvin. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Stuart Stratland Jr.
Location: Film project
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Stuart and Peggy Begin an Affair — Stuart falls in love with Peggy, and they have an affair. Characters: Stuart Stratland Jr., Peggy Pauline
Location: Unspecified
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The Script Loses Its Original Shape — Repeated compromises leave the screenplay almost unrecognizable. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Stuart Stratland Jr., Jack Roth
Location: Film project
Marriage Against the Film
Rachel asks Marvin to leave the project and move with her to New York, where she is opening a restaurant. Marvin instead breaks up with her and commits himself to the film.
Key Events
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The Script Loses Its Original Shape — Repeated compromises leave the screenplay almost unrecognizable. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Stuart Stratland Jr., Jack Roth
Location: Film project
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Rachel Offers a New Life — Rachel asks Marvin to leave the film and move with her to New York. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Rachel Landisman
Location: Unspecified
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Marvin Chooses the Film — Marvin breaks up with Rachel and remains loyal to the film project. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Rachel Landisman
Location: Unspecified
The Production Falls Apart
Beverly discovers that her expected role has been cut back in Peggy's favor just as the contracts are about to be signed. The project collapses, leaving Marvin broken and apparently done with Hollywood, until Roth contacts him again.
Key Events
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Beverly Discovers the Role Change — Beverly learns her expected role has been reduced in Peggy's favor. Characters: Beverly Dumont, Peggy Pauline, Marvin Landisman
Location: Unspecified signing venue
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The Financing Deal Collapses — The project falls apart just as contracts are about to be signed. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Jack Roth, Beverly Dumont
Location: Unspecified signing venue
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Marvin Leaves Hollywood — Broken by the collapse, Marvin considers himself finished with Hollywood. Characters: Marvin Landisman
Location: Hollywood
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Roth Contacts Marvin Again — Roth gets in touch again, leaving open the possibility of Marvin's return. Characters: Marvin Landisman, Jack Roth
Location: Unspecified