Plot Analysis Summary
An underwater housing experiment becomes entangled with band publicity, rival interference, and growing outside suspicion.
Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Submerged Experiment
Fred Miller proposes proving that his underwater home is viable through a thirty-day family experiment. The Green Onion is established ninety feet below the ocean surface with modern household amenities.
Key Events
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Underwater Home Proposal — Fred Miller proposes proving his underwater home design is viable. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: Ocean surface
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Thirty-Day Living Test — Fred must convince his family to live underwater for thirty days. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: Underwater home
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The Green Onion — Fred names the submerged experimental home the Green Onion. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: Ninety feet below the ocean surface
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Family Moves Below — Fred's family begins the temporary underwater residence. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: The Green Onion
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Bandmates Join Experiment — Two additional band members are invited to live in the home. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: The Green Onion
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Modern Undersea Amenities — Fred equips the home with modern appliances and amenities. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: The Green Onion
Life Beneath the Waves
The family and two band members settle into the Green Onion. A live-in seal and nearby dolphins become part of the unusual underwater environment, while practical obstacles begin to appear.
Key Events
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Modern Undersea Amenities — Fred equips the home with modern appliances and amenities. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: The Green Onion
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Open Sea Access — A large floor opening provides direct access to the sea. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: Floor opening of the Green Onion
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Gladys Arrives — The residents are joined by a live-in seal named Gladys. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: The Green Onion
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Dolphins Guard Home — Two dolphins remain nearby and fend off sharks. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: Ocean surrounding the Green Onion
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Undersea Obstacles Mount — The household faces multiple practical obstacles beneath the ocean. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: The Green Onion
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Rival Designer Interferes — A rival designer from Undersea Development, Inc. begins causing problems. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: The Green Onion
Rivals And Recognition
A rival designer from Undersea Development, Inc. starts causing problems for Fred's project. At the same time, the band's single attracts the attention of record executive Nate Ashbury.
Key Events
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Rival Designer Interferes — A rival designer from Undersea Development, Inc. begins causing problems. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: The Green Onion
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Band Single Gains Notice — Nate Ashbury hears the band's single and takes interest. Characters: Nate Ashbury
Location: Music industry office
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Nate Offers Representation — Nate wants to sign the band as a record executive. Characters: Nate Ashbury
Location: Music industry office
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Television Booking — Nate books the band for a televised performance without informing them first. Characters: Nate Ashbury
Location: Television production office
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Nate Learns Their Location — Nate learns that the band is living beneath the sea. Characters: Nate Ashbury, Fred Miller
Location: The Green Onion
Publicity Underwater
Nate wants to sign the band and books a televised performance without first communicating with them. After discovering their location, he schemes to bring a television host and crew to the Green Onion.
Key Events
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Nate Learns Their Location — Nate learns that the band is living beneath the sea. Characters: Nate Ashbury, Fred Miller
Location: The Green Onion
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Television Crew Scheme — Nate schemes to bring a television host and crew down to the home. Characters: Nate Ashbury, Fred Miller
Location: The Green Onion
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Music Draws Attention — The music associated with the underwater performance attracts outside attention. Characters: Fred Miller, Nate Ashbury
Location: Ocean around the Green Onion
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Navy Becomes Suspicious — The navy is alerted by the music and becomes suspicious. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: Ocean surrounding the Green Onion
Suspicion In The Deep
The music alerts the navy, which becomes suspicious of the underwater activity. Fred's experiment and Nate's publicity plan collide as the Green Onion faces heightened outside scrutiny.
Key Events
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Navy Becomes Suspicious — The navy is alerted by the music and becomes suspicious. Characters: Fred Miller
Location: Ocean surrounding the Green Onion
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Publicity Threatens Experiment — Nate's publicity plan places Fred's underwater experiment under scrutiny. Characters: Fred Miller, Nate Ashbury
Location: The Green Onion
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Undersea Experiment Tested — Fred's experimental home and Nate's publicity scheme converge under outside suspicion. Characters: Fred Miller, Nate Ashbury
Location: The Green Onion