Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Affluence Under Strain
Nick prepares for a family trip while enforcing financial restraint. At the mall, travel memories briefly suggest a stable and affectionate marriage.
Key Events
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Luggage and Allowance Argument — Nick prepares for a family trip while arguing with the children about spending money and financial restraint. Characters: Nick Fifer
Location: Family residence
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Nick Enforces Restraint — Nick refuses to match another father's generous allowance and reduces the money when complaints continue. Characters: Nick Fifer
Location: Family residence
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Affluence Hides Insecurity — Nick's strict behavior reveals tension and self-consciousness beneath the family's affluent lifestyle. Characters: Nick Fifer
Location: Family residence
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Arrival at the Mall — Nick and Deborah continue their day together at the mall before revisiting memories of their travels. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Mall
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Travel Photographs Revisited — The couple looks through photographs from past trips and remembers places they visited. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Mall
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Favorite Vacation Remembered — Nick and Deborah agree that one vacation had been especially satisfying. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Mall
The Marriage Unravels
The Mime interrupts the couple's private conversation as Nick begins exposing hidden marital problems. His affair confession and proposal of remarriage provoke Deborah's fury.
Key Events
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Mime Interrupts Conversation — The Mime interrupts the couple's intimate conversation, and Nick views the Mime as an unwelcome eavesdropper. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer, Mime
Location: Mall
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Marriage Begins Unraveling — Their apparently happy marriage begins to unravel as their conversation turns toward hidden problems. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Mall
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Nick Confesses Affair — Nick admits that he was involved with a painter he met during baseball-related business in Chicago. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Mall
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Affair Was Concealed — Nick says the affair has ended but that he has spent weeks trying to tell Deborah about it. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Mall
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Nick Proposes Remarriage — Nick raises the possibility of remarrying and presents it as a sophisticated solution. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Mall
Separation and Exposure
Deborah declares the marriage over and plans to find a lawyer, leaving Nick to explain himself through a recorded message. A later therapeutic conversation examines the emotional causes of his betrayal.
Key Events
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Deborah Ends the Marriage — Deborah reacts with fury, cancels their evening party, declares the marriage over, and plans to find a lawyer. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Mall
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Recorded Explanation — Nick tries to explain himself through a recorded message while holiday music continues around him. Characters: Nick Fifer
Location: Mall
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Therapeutic Conversation Begins — The couple later enters a therapeutic conversation about Nick's behavior and the damaged relationship. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Therapeutic setting
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Fear Drives Self-Sabotage — Nick acknowledges that insecurity and fear of losing Deborah led him to sabotage their relationship. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Therapeutic setting
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Need for Approval Exposed — The discussion links Nick's conduct to painful memories of his mother and his lifelong need for approval. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Therapeutic setting
A Conditional Renewal
Nick connects his behavior to insecurity, painful memories of his mother, and a need for approval. Deborah offers hope while making clear that repairing their life will require substantial work.
Key Events
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Need for Approval Exposed — The discussion links Nick's conduct to painful memories of his mother and his lifelong need for approval. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Therapeutic setting
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Deborah Offers Conditional Hope — Deborah says Nick has not permanently ruined their life, but repairing it will require substantial work. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Therapeutic setting
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Hopeful Understanding — Nick and Deborah reach a more hopeful understanding despite the damage caused by the affair and separation. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Therapeutic setting
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Business Deal News — Nick receives important news about a business deal made while he and Deborah were still married. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Celebration setting
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Nick Shares Deal Value — Nick insists that half of the business deal's value belongs to Deborah. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Celebration setting
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Deborah Buys New Dress — Deborah buys a striking new dress in preparation for the planned celebration. Characters: Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Mall
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Champagne and Caviar — They decide to celebrate together, suggesting that their relationship may be moving toward reconciliation. Characters: Nick Fifer, Dr. Deborah Finegold-Fifer
Location: Celebration setting
A comedy about a married couple -- he's a sports lawyer, she's a psychologist -- which takes place on their 16th wedding anniversary, when they make some startling confessions.