Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Death Opens The Veil
Frank dies in a bus accident, while Bertram briefly dies during a colonoscopy. Afterward, Bertram discovers that he can see and communicate with ghosts.
Key Events
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Frank Is Hit By A Bus — Frank is accidentally killed while trying to buy an apartment for his mistress. Characters: Frank Herlihy
Location: New York City street
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Bertram Dies For Seven Minutes — Bertram is briefly dead during a colonoscopy under general anesthesia. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus
Location: Medical facility
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Ghosts Become Visible — After recovering, Bertram can see and communicate with ghosts. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Frank Herlihy
Location: New York City
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Frank Offers A Bargain — Frank promises protection from other ghosts if Bertram breaks up Gwen and Richard. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Frank Herlihy
Location: New York City
A Ghostly Bargain
Frank offers to protect Bertram from the other ghosts if Bertram breaks up Gwen and Richard. Bertram uses his dental expertise to attract Gwen while beginning to question Richard's character.
Key Events
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Bertram Studies Mummy Teeth — Bertram analyzes the Pharaoh's teeth and attracts Gwen's interest. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Gwen Herlihy
Location: Gwen's Egyptology workspace
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Dinner With Gwen And Richard — Bertram has dinner with Gwen and Richard and begins reconsidering Richard. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Gwen Herlihy, Richard
Location: Restaurant
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A Walk And Personal Confessions — Bertram and Gwen walk her dog, share sad relationship stories, and discuss Frank's mistress. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Gwen Herlihy
Location: New York City
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Richard Visits Bertram — Richard visits Bertram for dental work and refuses to discuss his trouble with Gwen. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Richard
Location: Dental office
Love And Exposure
Bertram and Gwen grow closer through dinner, a dog walk, and personal conversations. Gwen's engagement ends, but Bertram's gift and supernatural secret expose his deception.
Key Events
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Nitrous Oxide Reveals The Breakup — Bertram uses nitrous oxide and learns that Gwen has broken her engagement to Richard. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Richard
Location: Dental office
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Gwen Accepts The Dig — Gwen accepts a six-month archaeological assignment in the Valley of the Kings. Characters: Gwen Herlihy, Dr. Bertram Pincus, Frank Herlihy
Location: New York City
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The Key Chain Gift — Bertram gives Gwen a key chain as a going-away present. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Gwen Herlihy
Location: New York City
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Bertram Reveals The Ghosts — Bertram accidentally reveals knowledge only Frank could have possessed and tells Gwen about the ghosts. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Gwen Herlihy, Frank Herlihy
Location: Gwen's home
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Frank Gives The Wrong Nightmare — Frank lies about his worst nightmare, and Gwen cuts Bertram off. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Frank Herlihy, Gwen Herlihy
Location: Gwen's home
Learning To Let Go
After Gwen rejects him, Bertram falls into depression and receives moral guidance from Dr. Prashar. He helps ghosts complete their emotional business and understands why they remain on Earth.
Key Events
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Bertram Falls Into Depression — Bertram asks Prashar for pain medication while sinking into depression. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Dr. Jahangir Prashar
Location: Dental office
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Prashar Challenges Bertram — Prashar urges Bertram to stop being cynical and begin helping people. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Dr. Jahangir Prashar
Location: Dental office
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Bertram Helps The Ghosts — Bertram helps ghosts comfort the people they left behind and depart. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Frank Herlihy
Location: New York City
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Bertram Understands The Ghosts — Bertram realizes ghosts remain because their loved ones have not finished grieving. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Frank Herlihy
Location: New York City
Finding The Way Home
Bertram confronts Gwen and is struck by a bus. Frank reveals the truth about his nightmare, leaves Earth, and Bertram survives to reunite with Gwen.
Key Events
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Bertram Confronts Gwen — Bertram confronts Gwen about Frank and is hit by a bus while trying to make her believe him. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Gwen Herlihy, Frank Herlihy
Location: New York City street
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Frank Reveals The True Nightmare — As Gwen cries and Richard performs CPR, Frank gives Bertram the true childhood nightmare and leaves Earth. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Frank Herlihy, Gwen Herlihy, Richard
Location: New York City street
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Bertram Returns To Gwen — Bertram survives, Gwen abandons the dig, and he tells her that Frank has found his way home. Characters: Dr. Bertram Pincus, Gwen Herlihy, Dr. Jahangir Prashar
Location: Dental office