Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Oil Deal Arrives
Neelyn and Harris arrive in West Virginia with London associates to invest in Preston's oil operation. Preston presents the visitors as investors while trying to protect the business and manage the tensions their arrival brings.
Key Events
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London Investors Arrive — Neelyn and Harris arrive with London associates to invest in Preston's oil operation. Characters: Neelyn, Harris, Preston
Location: West Virginia
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Oil Investment Proposed — The proposed deal promises legitimate business and local jobs. Characters: Harris, Preston
Location: Preston's oil operation
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Preston Reassures Agent — Preston tells a federal agent that the visitors are investors, not terrorists. Characters: Preston
Location: West Virginia
Junior's Conduct Surfaces
Junior's drunken trouble unsettles the visit. Will's account of Junior and Fiona's encounter angers Preston and deepens the strain among the characters.
Key Events
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Junior Causes Trouble — Junior gets drunk and causes trouble during the visitors' stay. Characters: Junior, Preston
Location: West Virginia
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Will Reveals the Encounter — Will says he saw Junior having sex with Fiona. Characters: Will, Junior, Fiona
Location: West Virginia
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Preston Faces Junior's Behavior — Preston is furious but recognizes Junior is dangerous and difficult to control. Characters: Preston, Junior
Location: West Virginia
Kara Becomes a Flashpoint
Neelyn becomes involved with Kara, but Junior threatens her. Neelyn intervenes and beats Junior, prompting Preston to restrict his son to the oil site and send Milt with him.
Key Events
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Neelyn Meets Kara — Neelyn becomes involved with Kara, a woman at the lodge. Characters: Neelyn, Kara
Location: Lodge
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Junior Threatens Kara — Junior threatens Kara, and Neelyn intervenes. Characters: Junior, Kara, Neelyn
Location: Lodge
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Neelyn Beats Junior — Neelyn beats Junior and makes clear he will not leave Kara alone. Characters: Neelyn, Junior
Location: Lodge
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Junior Confined to Oil Site — Preston restricts Junior to work and sleep at the oil site and orders Milt to take him into the mountains. Characters: Preston, Junior, Milt
Location: Oil site
The Drilling Site Confrontation
Preston asks Neelyn to leave and fight another day, but Neelyn chooses to confront Junior. He goes alone to the drilling site, where Junior mocks and challenges him; the supplied account ends as their fight begins.
Key Events
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Preston Urges Restraint — Preston asks Neelyn to leave and fight another day. Characters: Preston, Neelyn
Location: West Virginia
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Neelyn Chooses Confrontation — After a tense farewell with Fiona, Neelyn insists the matter is between him and Junior. Characters: Neelyn, Fiona
Location: West Virginia
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Neelyn Goes Alone — Neelyn heads to the drilling site alone to confront Junior. Characters: Neelyn
Location: Drilling site
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Junior Challenges Neelyn — Junior mocks Neelyn about Kara and challenges him. Characters: Neelyn, Junior
Location: Drilling site
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Fight Outcome Unresolved — Neelyn and Junior begin fighting; the supplied account ends before the outcome. Characters: Neelyn, Junior
Location: Drilling site