Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Rules and Family Strain
Daniel and Eli are raised under Dorothee's unusual outlook, and their father leaves. Daniel's troubling dreams and the family's difficulties begin to complicate their future.
Key Events
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Growing Up Under Dorothee's Rules — Dorothee raises her sons with unusual rules and urges them to change how they see the world. Characters: Daniel Davis, Eli Davis, Dorothee Davis
Location: Family home
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Their Father Leaves — The brothers' father leaves, adding to the family's difficult circumstances. Characters: Daniel Davis, Eli Davis, Dorothee Davis, Cliff Davis
Location: Family home
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Daniel's Troubling Dreams — Daniel experiences troubling dreams after his father leaves. Characters: Daniel Davis
Location: Unspecified
Help Against the Odds
Mrs. Meyers sees college potential in Daniel and tries to address financial aid with Dorothee. Louis offers the brothers food, a heater, and encouragement.
Key Events
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College and Financial Aid — Mrs. Meyers says Daniel's grades make him a strong college candidate and tries to reach Dorothee about financial aid. Characters: Daniel Davis, Mrs. Meyers, Dorothee Davis
Location: School
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Louis Offers Practical Help — Louis gives the brothers food and a heater, and encourages them to care for each other. Characters: Daniel Davis, Eli Davis, Louis
Location: Neighbor's home
Holding On Through Hardship
Daniel and Eli sleep in their car while continuing schoolwork. A helpful officer encourages them to look after each other, as Daniel fears being abandoned.
Key Events
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Sleeping in the Car — The brothers sleep in their car but continue going to school and doing homework. Characters: Daniel Davis, Eli Davis
Location: Car
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A Stranger Encourages Them — A helpful officer recognizes their hardship and urges the brothers to look after each other. Characters: Daniel Davis, Eli Davis
Location: Unspecified
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Daniel Fears Abandonment — The brothers hold onto their bond, while Daniel fears being abandoned. Characters: Daniel Davis, Eli Davis
Location: Unspecified
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A College Negotiation Story — An account describes a young man persuading his parents to let him attend college by taking their dog and negotiating for her return.
Location: Unspecified
Loss and Denial
An account about a young man's pursuit of college offers a contrast to the brothers' uncertain prospects. Daniel then learns of Dorothee's death and is pressured to deny what he sees.
Key Events
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News of Dorothee's Death — Daniel is told that Dorothee is dead. Characters: Daniel Davis, Dorothee Davis
Location: Unspecified
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Daniel Denies What He Sees — A man pressures Daniel to deny what he sees; Daniel says he sees nothing and helps carry away what the man calls a piece of nothing. Characters: Daniel Davis
Location: Unspecified
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Eli Does Not Answer — Daniel tries to reach Eli, but his calls go unanswered. Characters: Daniel Davis, Eli Davis
Location: Unspecified
A Promise for the Future
After failing to reach Eli by phone, Daniel finds him at a place their mother loved. The brothers confront their fear of separation and consider applying to nearby colleges.
Key Events
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Eli Does Not Answer — Daniel tries to reach Eli, but his calls go unanswered. Characters: Daniel Davis, Eli Davis
Location: Unspecified
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Reunion at a Beloved Place — Daniel finds Eli, apologizes for not telling him sooner, and hears Eli say that everyone leaves him. Characters: Daniel Davis, Eli Davis, Dorothee Davis
Location: A place Dorothee loved
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A Promise to Stay Together — Daniel promises Eli that he will not leave, and the brothers consider college applications close to home. Characters: Daniel Davis, Eli Davis
Location: A place Dorothee loved