Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Poetry and Recognition
A student's poem draws Auster's attention, and his encouragement leads her to win a local competition. He recommends that she compete nationally in Florida.
Key Events
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Poem Read in Class — A student reads her poem aloud, and Auster recognizes her talent. Characters: Auster, Boy in Class
Location: English classroom
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Auster Offers Mentorship — Auster encourages the student and becomes her mentor. Characters: Auster
Location: School
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Local Poetry Contest — The student enters the local contest and wins. Characters: Auster
Location: Local poetry competition
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Florida Contest Recommended — Auster recommends competing at the national event in Florida. Characters: Auster
Location: School
Loss at Home
Lily's distress escalates, and she dies after jumping from a hospital window. Auster offers comfort, while the family faces emotional and financial strain.
Key Events
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Lily's Distress Worsens — Lily cuts herself, refuses food, and speaks about becoming an angel. Characters: Lily, Diane
Location: Family home
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Lily Enters Hospital Ward — Lily is checked into a psychiatric ward. Characters: Lily
Location: Hospital psychiatric ward
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Lily Dies After Falling — Trying to fly, Lily jumps from an open window and dies. Characters: Lily
Location: Hospital
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Auster Shares His Loss — Auster comforts the grieving student and reveals that he lost a son. Characters: Auster
Location: Unspecified meeting place
A Costly Route South
Unable to fund the Florida trip, the student loses her job and leaves home to stay with Georgia. Pat offers a criminal way to earn money, then disappears with it.
Key Events
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Florida Trip Unaffordable — Diane says she cannot afford the student's trip to Florida. Characters: Diane
Location: Family home
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Job Lost After Theft — The student resorts to stealing and is fired from her after-school job.
Location: After-school workplace
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Georgia Offers Shelter — After leaving home, the student stays at Georgia's place. Characters: Georgia's Mom
Location: Georgia's home
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Pat Proposes Drug Theft — Pat offers a way to make money by stealing prescription drugs. Characters: Pat, Georgia's Mom
Location: Georgia's home
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Pharmacy Robbery — The student steals prescription drugs for Pat. Characters: Pat
Location: Pharmacy
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Pat Disappears with Money — The student discovers Pat has left town with the money. Characters: Pat
Location: Unspecified
Truth on the Shore
In Florida, Auster's attention turns into an uncomfortable sexual encounter, and the student discovers his claim about writing a novel was false. She uses a new poem at the competition to denounce his conduct.
Key Events
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Bus Journey to Florida — The student travels alone to Florida by bus.
Location: Bus
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Auster's Family at Beach — The student sees Auster with his family; Delia invites her to join them. Characters: Auster, Delia
Location: Florida beach
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Beach Walk and Kiss — Auster walks alone with the student and kisses her. Characters: Auster
Location: Florida beach
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Hotel Room Encounter — The student reluctantly has sex with Auster; he stops when he realizes she is uncomfortable. Characters: Auster
Location: Hotel room
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Novel Claim Exposed — The student learns Auster invented his claim that he was writing a novel. Characters: Auster
Location: Hotel room
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New Poem Condemns Auster — The student reads a new poem that subtly denounces Auster's manipulation and abuse of authority. Characters: Auster, Delia
Location: Poetry competition auditorium
A Return and Departure
The student casts her old poem into the water and returns to Ohio. She reconciles with Diane, receives old wedding photographs, and leaves with her father.
Key Events
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Old Poem Cast Away — Alone on the beach, the student throws her earlier poem into the water.
Location: Beach
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Reconciliation with Diane — The student reconciles emotionally with Diane, who leaves her old wedding photographs. Characters: Diane
Location: Diane's apartment
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Departure in Blue Car — The student leaves with her father in a blue car to live with him.
Location: Ohio