Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Bullied Before Discovery
Ralph and Baxter endure repeated bullying at high school. Their discovery of a secret chamber changes their sense of power and possibility.
Key Events
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School Bullying — Ralph and Baxter are frequently tormented by bullies at school. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: High school
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Shared Frustration — The bullying creates a shared desire to escape their powerless situation. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: High school
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Secret Chamber — Ralph and Baxter find a hidden chamber beneath or within their surroundings. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Secret chamber
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Alien Weapon Hoard — The chamber contains a hoard of advanced weapons belonging to aliens. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Secret chamber
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Advanced Armor — Alien armor is discovered alongside the advanced weapons. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Secret chamber
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Hero Dreams Awaken — The technology makes their superhero fantasies seem possible. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Secret chamber
The Superhero Fantasy
The two students find alien weapons and armor in the chamber. They use the technology against their bullies and begin acting out their superhero fantasies.
Key Events
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Weapons Taken — Ralph and Baxter take control of the discovered alien equipment. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Secret chamber
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Bullies Challenged — They use the technology to get back at the school bullies. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: High school
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Fantasy Becomes Action — Their imagined superhero roles become a real course of action. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: High school
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Alien Alert — The alien owners are alerted that their equipment has been found. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Unspecified location
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Owners Return — The alien owners return to recover their property. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Earth
The Owners Return
The alien owners detect the discovery and return to reclaim their property. Their recovery effort reveals that the equipment is connected to a threat against humanity.
Key Events
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Owners Return — The alien owners return to recover their property. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Earth
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Property Reclaimed — The returning owners attempt to take back the alien equipment. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Earth
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Humanity Threatened — The equipment is connected to a plan to wipe out humanity. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Earth
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Bully Recruited — The alien owners enlist one of the bullies to retrieve their equipment. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Earth
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Recovery Mission — The recruited bully joins the effort to recover the alien property. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Earth
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Manipulated Participants — The alien plan uses both human participants for its larger objective. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Earth
The Armageddon Download
The aliens enlist a bully to help retrieve the equipment. Ralph discovers that he and the bully are both being used to download a beam designed to eliminate human life.
Key Events
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Armageddon Beam — A weapon called the Armageddon Beam is intended to destroy all human life. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Earth
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Shared Download — Ralph discovers that he and a bully are both being used to download the beam. Characters: Ralph
Location: Earth
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Humanity At Risk — The discovery reveals the immediate danger to every human life on Earth. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Earth
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Final Resistance — Ralph and Baxter face the alien threat after learning how they are being used. Characters: Ralph, Baxter
Location: Earth