Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Prosecutor's Mandate
John Conroy receives extraordinary powers to attack Neil Eichelberger's syndicate. Jerry McKibbon supports the effort but questions John's experience, while Matt becomes John's chief investigator.
Key Events
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Special Prosecutor Appointed — John receives extraordinary powers to dismantle the crime syndicate. Characters: John Conroy, Jerry McKibbon, Neil Eichelberger
Location: Large midwestern town
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Investigation Targets Eichelberger — John focuses his investigation on Neil's criminal operation. Characters: John Conroy, Neil Eichelberger
Location: Large midwestern town
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McKibbon Questions John's Experience — Jerry supports the investigation but doubts John's experience. Characters: Jerry McKibbon, John Conroy
Location: Large midwestern town
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Matt Joins Investigation — Matt becomes John's chief investigator despite being his father. Characters: John Conroy, Matt Conroy
Location: Large midwestern town
A Father's Divided Loyalty
Jerry discovers that Matt is a crooked cop working for Neil. He forces Matt to choose between the mob and exposure, leading Matt to seek a damaging file while keeping a copy.
Key Events
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Matt's Corruption Discovered — Jerry discovers that Matt is a crooked cop working for Neil. Characters: Jerry McKibbon, Matt Conroy, Neil Eichelberger
Location: Large midwestern town
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McKibbon Issues an Ultimatum — Jerry orders Matt to break with the mob or face exposure. Characters: Jerry McKibbon, Matt Conroy
Location: Large midwestern town
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Damning File Requested — Matt agrees to obtain a file requested by Eichelberger. Characters: Matt Conroy, Neil Eichelberger
Location: D.A.'s office
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Matt Keeps a Copy — Matt plans to retain a copy of the file to vindicate himself. Characters: Matt Conroy
Location: D.A.'s office
The Syndicate Strikes Back
Neil orders Matt's murder and uses the staged robbery to create fear. As John's investigation advances, Neil burns the building containing the syndicate's books, killing most of its renters.
Key Events
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Murder Plot Against Matt — Neil orders Matt killed to frighten the organization. Characters: Neil Eichelberger, Matt Conroy
Location: Large midwestern town
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Matt Killed in Robbery — Matt is killed during a staged robbery. Characters: Matt Conroy, Neil Eichelberger
Location: Large midwestern town
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LaRue Is Killed — Matt's assassin, Monty LaRue, is immediately killed in turn. Characters: Neil Eichelberger
Location: Large midwestern town
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Investigation Uncovers Crimes — John's investigation systematically exposes Neil's crimes. Characters: John Conroy, Neil Eichelberger
Location: Large midwestern town
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Syndicate Records Threatened — Neil anticipates subpoenas for the organization's books. Characters: John Conroy, Neil Eichelberger
Location: Building housing syndicate books
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Records Building Burned — Neil has the building burned, killing nearly all its renters. Characters: Neil Eichelberger
Location: Building housing syndicate books
Witnesses Under Threat
An expose connects Neil to the deaths of Matt and LaRue. Carmelina seeks Jerry's help, but Neil's men drive her away while Roy arranges an attempt to silence Jerry.
Key Events
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Murder Expose Revealed — An expose reveals that Neil also had LaRue killed. Characters: Jerry McKibbon, Neil Eichelberger
Location: Large midwestern town
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Carmelina Seeks Revenge — Carmelina contacts Jerry but is driven away by Neil's henchmen. Characters: Carmelina LaRue, Jerry McKibbon, Neil Eichelberger
Location: Large midwestern town
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Roy Demands Jerry's Death — Roy demands Jerry's death because Jerry can identify Carmelina's husband's murderer. Characters: Roy Ackerman, Jerry McKibbon, Neil Eichelberger
Location: Large midwestern town
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Boxing Match Trap — Roy arranges for Jerry to be lured to a boxing match for the shooting. Characters: Roy Ackerman, Jerry McKibbon, Red
Location: Boxing match
The Price of the Law
Carmelina reaches John and provides testimony that helps topple Neil. Red shoots Jerry at the boxing match, but Neil and his crew are arrested before Jerry dies.
Key Events
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Carmelina Reaches John — Carmelina reaches John and provides testimony against Neil. Characters: Carmelina LaRue, John Conroy
Location: Large midwestern town
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Red Shoots McKibbon — Red shoots Jerry while he is at the boxing match. Characters: Jerry McKibbon, Red
Location: Boxing match
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Syndicate Leaders Arrested — Neil and his crew are arrested as Jerry lies dying. Characters: John Conroy, Neil Eichelberger, Roy Ackerman, Red, Jerry McKibbon
Location: Boxing match
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McKibbon Dies — Jerry dies before John can arrive at the scene. Characters: Jerry McKibbon, John Conroy
Location: Large midwestern town
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Epitaph for the Law — John repeats Jerry's saying about the price of upholding the law. Characters: John Conroy, Jerry McKibbon
Location: Large midwestern town