Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Promotion Built on Bias
Laurel works on Wall Street but is denied a promotion because of her gender. Her less capable male protégé, Frank, becomes her boss, prompting her to leave and seek independence.
Key Events
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Laurel Pursues Promotion — Laurel works toward advancement while Frank remains her male protégé. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Frank Peterson
Location: Wall Street
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Promotion Denied — Laurel learns she is passed over because of her gender. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Frank Peterson
Location: Wall Street
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Frank Becomes Boss — The less intelligent male protégé becomes Laurel's superior. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Frank Peterson
Location: Wall Street
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Laurel Quits — Unable to accept the reversal, Laurel leaves her firm. Characters: Laurel Ayres
Location: Wall Street
Inventing Robert Cutty
Wall Street refuses to take Laurel seriously as an African American woman. She creates the fictional white male identity Robert S. Cutty and studies the codes needed to sustain the deception.
Key Events
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New Venture Rejected — Investors refuse to take an African American woman seriously. Characters: Laurel Ayres
Location: Wall Street
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Cutty Sark Inspiration — Laurel creates the fictional white male identity Robert S. Cutty. Characters: Laurel Ayres
Location: Laurel's new company
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Persona Research — Laurel studies the cultural and performative codes of the identity. Characters: Laurel Ayres
Location: Laurel's new company
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Sally Joins Laurel — Sally's overlooked computer expertise strengthens Laurel's venture. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan
Location: Laurel's new company
Success Behind the Mask
Sally joins Laurel, adding crucial computer expertise to the financial operation. Together they become successful brokers and help a struggling high-tech company remain afloat.
Key Events
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Brokerage Gains Success — The partners become highly successful independent stockbrokers. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan
Location: Stock market
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Technology Investment — Their financial work helps a struggling high-tech computer company survive. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan
Location: High-tech computer company
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Cutty Takes Credit — The fictional persona receives credit for Laurel's ideas and achievements. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan
Location: Laurel's new company
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Publicity Pressure Mounts — Competing firms and tabloid journalists seek to expose Cutty publicly. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan
Location: Wall Street
The Persona Turns Dangerous
Cutty receives credit for Laurel's ideas while competitors and journalists demand public access to the elusive financier. Laurel's physical disguise fails to resolve the growing pressure.
Key Events
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Publicity Pressure Mounts — Competing firms and tabloid journalists seek to expose Cutty publicly. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan
Location: Wall Street
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Disguise Is Prepared — Laurel recruits her best friend to create a physical Cutty disguise. Characters: Laurel Ayres
Location: Nightclub
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Laurel Appears As Cutty — Laurel uses the disguise to appear publicly as the fictional financier. Characters: Laurel Ayres
Location: Wall Street
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Disguise Fails — The disguise does not solve the pressure to reveal Cutty publicly. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan
Location: Wall Street
Exposure and Reckoning
Laurel and Sally's attempt to eliminate the fictional identity backfires, and Frank discovers their secret. Laurel's final appearance as Cutty ends with her unmasking herself and exposing discrimination.
Key Events
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Murder Plan Begins — Laurel and Sally decide to kill the fictional Cutty. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan
Location: Laurel's new company
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Murder Plan Backfires — The plan fails, and both women are charged with Cutty's murder. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan
Location: Laurel's new company
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Frank Discovers Truth — Frank uncovers that Robert S. Cutty is a fictional identity. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan, Frank Peterson
Location: Laurel's new company
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Frank Takes Control — Frank blackmails the women and becomes Cutty's front man. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan, Frank Peterson
Location: Laurel's new company
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Final Cutty Appearance — Laurel dons the disguise again to attend Cutty's awards meeting. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan, Frank Peterson
Location: Exclusive gentlemen's club
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Laurel Unmasks Herself — Laurel reveals her identity and condemns racial and sexual discrimination. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan, Frank Peterson
Location: Exclusive gentlemen's club
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Laurel Receives Credit — Laurel is finally recognized for the work attributed to Cutty. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan
Location: Wall Street
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Business Empire Emerges — Laurel builds a large business empire with her friends leading it. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan
Location: Laurel's new company
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Frank Is Ridiculed — Frank is ridiculed when he tries to obtain a job with the business. Characters: Laurel Ayres, Sally Dugan, Frank Peterson
Location: Laurel's new company
Laurel Ayres is a businesswoman trying to make it but unfortunately she works at a investment firm where she does all the work but all the senior investors like Frank Peterson grab all the credit. She then leaves and starts her own firm. While trying to find clients Laurel pretends that she has a male partner named Robert Cutty. And when she starts to do well all of her clients wants to meet Cutty which is difficult since he doesn't exist.