Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Crowded Bunks And Clashing Travelers
Maxwell settles into the compartment and is disturbed by Jorg, then by Kath and Les. Shona's arrival adds another passenger and intensifies the cramped, comic discomfort.
Key Events
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Maxwell Boards the Train — Maxwell settles into bunk 9E while traveling from Paris to Bourg-Saint-Maurice. Characters: Maxwell
Location: Train compartment
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Jorg Takes the Wrong Bunk — The drunk, flatulent Jorg climbs into bunk 9D and disturbs Maxwell. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg
Location: Train compartment
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The Couple Arrives — Kath and Les arrive for their daughter's wedding, finding Jorg in Les's bed. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg, Kath, Les
Location: Train compartment
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Shona Leaves Her Bag — Shona places her bag on bunk 9C and leaves while Maxwell closes the door. Characters: Maxwell, Kath, Les, Shona
Location: Train compartment
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Awkward Undressing — Kath and Les laugh at Maxwell and begin undressing on their bed. Characters: Maxwell, Kath, Les
Location: Train compartment
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Jorg Changes Bunks — Maxwell translates after Les wakes Jorg; Jorg moves to 9F and Les takes 9D. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg, Les
Location: Train compartment
A Body Behind Bunk 9B
Shona and Hugo begin a romantic encounter before a man falls from bunk 9B. Maxwell confirms the death and returns without finding a guard.
Key Events
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Travel Stories Shared — Shona and Hugo share a beer and exchange travel stories in bunk 9C. Characters: Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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Foreplay in Bunk 9C — Hugo praises the carriage over first class, and he and Shona begin foreplay. Characters: Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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A Man Falls Out — A face appears from bunk 9B and an unidentified man falls to the floor. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg, Kath, Les, Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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The Passenger Is Dead — Maxwell examines the fallen man and confirms that he is dead. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg, Kath, Les, Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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Maxwell Searches for Help — Maxwell leaves the compartment to look for a guard. Characters: Maxwell
Location: Train corridor
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Family Photo Found — Jorg finds a family photograph in the dead man's pocket. Characters: Jorg, Kath, Les, Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
The Carriage Becomes A Trap
The passengers debate using the emergency stop while Hugo reveals that he has no ticket. Personal priorities, medication, and a makeshift eulogy complicate their attempt to contain the crisis.
Key Events
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Family Photo Found — Jorg finds a family photograph in the dead man's pocket. Characters: Jorg, Kath, Les, Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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Maxwell Returns Alone — Maxwell returns without a guard, leaving the passengers to manage the body themselves. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg, Kath, Les, Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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Emergency Stop Debate — Jorg suggests using the emergency stop, and Les prepares to smash the protective glass. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg, Kath, Les, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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Hugo Admits Stowing Away — Hugo stops Les and confesses that he has no ticket. Characters: Maxwell, Les, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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Wedding Versus Interview — Maxwell mentions his WHO interview, while Les admits he fears missing the wedding. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg, Kath, Les
Location: Train compartment
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Constipation Tablets — Maxwell gives Jorg tablets for constipation during the tense overnight wait. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg
Location: Train compartment
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A Eulogy for the Dead — Shona offers a eulogy, and the passengers place the body into bunk 9B. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg, Kath, Les, Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
False Panic At Dawn
The train brakes and the body falls, prompting Maxwell to suspect that Kath has stopped the train or jumped in front of it. Shona discovers that the train actually hit a deer, and Kath returns safely.
Key Events
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The Sleepless Night — The passengers settle, but Kath remains awake while Hugo climbs into the bunk with the body. Characters: Maxwell, Kath, Les, Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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The Train Brakes — The train brakes, waking everyone as Hugo and the body fall from the bunk. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg, Kath, Les, Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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Panic Over Kath — Maxwell suspects Kath stopped the train or jumped, while Les hits him with a pillow and Jorg uses the shoebox. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg, Les, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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The Train Hit a Deer — Shona sees that the train hit a deer, explaining the sudden braking. Characters: Shona, Maxwell, Jorg, Les, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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Kath Returns Safely — Kath re-enters the carriage, revealing that she was not struck by the train. Characters: Maxwell, Kath, Les, Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
The Wrong Colleague
The passengers separate after discussing the funeral and the wedding. Maxwell then learns that Jorg is Dr. Meyer, realizing that the dead man was the wrong colleague.
Key Events
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Kath Returns Safely — Kath re-enters the carriage, revealing that she was not struck by the train. Characters: Maxwell, Kath, Les, Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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Funeral Promise — Les expresses remorse, and Kath insists they attend the dead passenger's funeral after the wedding. Characters: Maxwell, Kath, Les
Location: Train compartment
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Passengers Depart — Shona and Hugo leave to explore, while Maxwell says goodbye to Kath and Les. Characters: Maxwell, Kath, Les, Shona, Hugo
Location: Train compartment
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Jorg Is Dr Meyer — A call identifies Dr Meyer as the interview candidate, and smartly dressed Jorg answers. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg
Location: Train compartment
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Maxwell Understands the Mistake — Maxwell silently realizes that he has accidentally killed the wrong colleague. Characters: Maxwell, Jorg
Location: Train compartment
On board the sleeper from Paris to Bourg St Maurice, a motley collection of passengers try to get a quiet night's sleep as the train makes its way across France. But as the sleeping compartment fills up, the chances of that begin to look highly unlikely. In deuxième classe, everyone can hear you scream.