Plot Analysis Summary
A strained relationship and a remote Highland journey become entangled with unsettling folklore, disappearance, and an unresolved threat.
Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Strain on the Water
A pregnant woman and her partner embark on a Highland boat trip while arguing about their circumstances and holiday. A phone number overheard on a train later becomes relevant as unsettling calls and messages arrive.
Key Events
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The Highland Boat Journey — A pregnant woman and her partner begin a boat trip while their relationship is strained.
Location: Scottish Highlands
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The IVF Treatment Call — A call about costly IVF treatment sparks complaints about the chosen holiday.
Location: Boat
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Tension with Passengers — An argument with other passengers and poor reception compound the couple's tension.
Location: Boat
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A Number Overheard — A woman's phone number is read aloud and overheard on a train.
Location: Train
Folklore and Unease
A local story about the Well of Seven Heads and Cernunnos gives the remote landscape a threatening quality. The pregnant woman becomes ill, and Mary treats a cut on her arm with honey.
Key Events
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The Seven Heads Legend — Passengers hear a local tale about the Well of Seven Heads and followers of Cernunnos. Characters: Mary
Location: Scottish Highlands
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Illness and a Cut — The pregnant woman becomes ill and develops a cut on her arm; Mary treats it with honey. Characters: Mary
Location: Boat
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Toward the Waterfall — The women continue toward a waterfall despite the pregnant woman's illness. Characters: Mary
Location: Waterfall route
The Waterfall Disappearance
The pregnant woman vanishes near a waterfall, prompting a frantic search amid screams and frightening sounds. The couple's conflict deepens as accusations and a painful disclosure surface.
Key Events
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A Sudden Disappearance — The pregnant woman vanishes, and her partner searches amid screams and frightening sounds.
Location: Waterfall
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Accusations of Exclusion — The pregnant woman accuses her partner of shutting her out for months.
Location: Remote area
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The Lost Baby Confession — Her partner reveals her former marriage to Miles and says the lost baby was hers too.
Location: Remote area
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Love Rejected — The pregnant woman rejects her partner and tells her to leave despite her pleas.
Location: Remote area
The House and the Call
At a remote house, the partner hears screams, finds Donny distressed, and looks for missing Claire. Mary urges quiet while movement is heard outside; Donna then calls, but Claire remains missing and the danger unresolved.
Key Events
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Screams at the House — The partner hears screams, finds Donny in distress, and searches for missing Claire.
Location: Remote house
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Mary Urges Silence — Mary tries to shelter the partner and urges her to stay quiet as someone seems to move outside. Characters: Mary
Location: Remote house
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Donna Calls — Donna apologizes, explains how the number was obtained, and admits sending messages while denying she is there.
Location: Remote house
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Claire Remains Missing — The excerpt ends with Claire still missing and the threat unresolved. Characters: Claire
Location: Remote house