Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Marriage In Stagnation
Marjorie feels neglected after eight years of marriage. Jeanine encourages her to abandon her routine and pursue a fling.
Key Events
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Marital Dissatisfaction — Marjorie feels neglected after eight years of marriage and resents her husband's snooty relatives. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Marjorie's home
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Jeanine Gives Advice — Jeanine urges Marjorie to escape her routine and have a fling. Characters: Marjorie Turner, Jeanine
Location: Marjorie's home
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A Risky Decision — Marjorie allows herself to be picked up for a quick sexual encounter. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Grocery store
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Fatal Tryst — Marjorie's anonymous lover dies during their sexual encounter. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Hotel room
The Fatal Encounter
Marjorie's brief sexual encounter ends when her lover dies. The discovery that he belongs to her husband's family transforms embarrassment into panic.
Key Events
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The Dead Man Identified — The dead man is revealed to be her husband's long-absent brother. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Hotel room
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Wallet Left Behind — Marjorie leaves the room with the door ajar and accidentally drops her wallet. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Hotel room
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Blind Installation — A vertical blinds salesman enters, hoping to demonstrate the product to the hotel.
Location: Hotel room
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Hardware Strikes Body — A slipping blind pole hits the lifeless man in the bed.
Location: Hotel room
A Desperate Cover-Up
A blinds salesman becomes involved after an accident in the hotel room. Marjorie and the salesman stage the scene as a suicide and report the death.
Key Events
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Mistaken Phone Call — Believing Marjorie is the dead man's wife, the salesman calls her after the accident.
Location: Hotel hallway
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Return For Wallet — Marjorie returns to the hotel room to recover her wallet. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Hotel room
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Panic And Partnership — Marjorie and the salesman panic and decide to make the death look like suicide. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Hotel room
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Forged Suicide Note — Marjorie writes a suicide note as part of the cover-up. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Hotel room
Evidence Against The Lie
The police investigation and autopsy undermine the staged suicide. The salesman confesses to striking the body with blind hardware.
Key Events
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Pills Planted — The conspirators empty bottles of pills down the dead man's throat.
Location: Hotel room
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Anonymous Emergency Call — Marjorie calls 911 from home to report the death. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Marjorie's home
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Police Enter Room — Police arrive while the salesman is still in the room.
Location: Hotel room
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Investigation Begins — The officer investigating the emergency call meets Jeanine during the inquiry. Characters: Jeanine
Location: Investigation site
Truth And Renewal
Jeanine warns Marjorie about the confession, prompting Marjorie to tell the truth. The family crisis leads to separation, recovery, and publication of her story.
Key Events
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Autopsy Finds Contradictions — The autopsy finds non-lethal pills in the esophagus and possible evidence of cardiac arrest.
Location: Coroner's office
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Accidental Confession — The salesman confesses that he accidentally hit the man with blind hardware.
Location: Police station
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Family Meeting Called — Marjorie's husband calls a family meeting to explain the investigation. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Family home
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Jeanine Brings News — Jeanine bursts in and tells Marjorie that the salesman is protecting her by confessing. Characters: Marjorie Turner, Jeanine
Location: Family home
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Marjorie Tells The Truth — Marjorie confesses everything in front of the family. Characters: Marjorie Turner, Jeanine
Location: Family home
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Family Backlash — The family attacks Marjorie after hearing her confession. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Family home
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Marriage Separates — Her husband orders the family out, leaves the practice, and moves away. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Family home
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Siblings Recover — Months later, Marjorie and Jeanine are doing better after the crisis. Characters: Marjorie Turner, Jeanine
Location: Marjorie's home
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Story Finds An Audience — Marjorie gets the story about the marriage and the death published. Characters: Marjorie Turner
Location: Publishing office