Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Hiring & Early Days
The Boss introduces his isolated office and staff before hiring the enigmatic Bartleby. Bartleby initially excels at filing but quickly shifts to a state of passive withdrawal.
Key Events
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Boss Spots Bartleby on Overpass — The Boss sees a mysterious man standing on an overpass during his commute. Characters: The Boss
Location: Overpass
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Office Staff Introduction — The Boss's isolated hilltop office and his three distinct employees are introduced. Characters: The Boss, Vivian, Rocky, Ernest
Location: Public Records Office
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Job Posting & Application — The Boss posts a vacancy and Bartleby becomes the sole applicant. Characters: The Boss, Bartleby
Location: Public Records Office
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Vague Interview & Hiring — Bartleby gives vague answers about his past and is hired despite unsettling the Boss. Characters: The Boss, Bartleby
Location: Public Records Office
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Initial High Productivity — Bartleby quickly completes a week's worth of filing work in just a few days. Characters: Bartleby
Location: Public Records Office
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The First Refusal — Bartleby refuses to verify documents, delivering his signature line: 'I would prefer not to.' Characters: Bartleby, The Boss
Location: Public Records Office
The Refusal & Coexistence
Bartleby's signature refusal disrupts office operations and leads to the discovery that he is living there. The Boss attempts to reason with him while the staff grows hostile.
Key Events
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The First Refusal — Bartleby refuses to verify documents, delivering his signature line: 'I would prefer not to.' Characters: Bartleby, The Boss
Location: Public Records Office
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Staring at the Vent — Bartleby stops working entirely and stares at a loudly vibrating vent above his desk. Characters: Bartleby
Location: Public Records Office
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Discovery of Living Arrangements — The Boss brings a date after hours and discovers Bartleby has been living in the office. Characters: The Boss, Bartleby
Location: Public Records Office
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Linguistic Contagion — The Boss realizes he and his staff have started frequently using the word 'prefer'. Characters: The Boss, Vivian, Rocky, Ernest
Location: Public Records Office
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Termination & Refusal to Leave — The Boss fires Bartleby, but Bartleby refuses to leave the premises by Monday. Characters: The Boss, Bartleby
Location: Public Records Office
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Office Relocation — Unable to evict Bartleby legally, the Boss moves his entire office to a different building. Characters: The Boss
Location: New Building
The Eviction & Exile
After firing Bartleby, the Boss is forced to relocate his office when Bartleby refuses to leave. The Boss provides a recommendation letter, but Bartleby's situation deteriorates on the streets.
Key Events
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Office Relocation — Unable to evict Bartleby legally, the Boss moves his entire office to a different building. Characters: The Boss
Location: New Building
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Recommendation & Dead Bird — The Boss gives Bartleby a letter of recommendation while a repairman removes a dead bird from the vent. Characters: The Boss, Bartleby
Location: Old Office Building
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Lobby Siege — Bartleby sleeps in the lobby while former owners pressure the Boss for help. Characters: The Boss, Bartleby
Location: Old Building Lobby
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Failed Job Assistance & Arrest — Bartleby declines all job suggestions, leading to his arrest and subsequent release. Characters: The Boss, Bartleby
Location: Street
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Discovery in Homeless Camp — The Boss finds Bartleby weak and delirious from starvation, having preferred not to eat. Characters: The Boss, Bartleby
Location: Homeless Camp
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Soup Kitchen Rejection — The Boss struggles to get sympathy from a cook and waits in line to feed Bartleby. Characters: The Boss, Bartleby
Location: Soup Kitchen
The Starvation & Death
The Boss tracks down a starving Bartleby in a homeless camp and attempts to secure food, but fails to reach him in time. Bartleby dies, leaving the Boss with a profound realization.
Key Events
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Soup Kitchen Rejection — The Boss struggles to get sympathy from a cook and waits in line to feed Bartleby. Characters: The Boss, Bartleby
Location: Soup Kitchen
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Bartleby's Death — The Boss returns to find Bartleby dead, realizing the recommendation letter is now a dead letter. Characters: The Boss, Bartleby
Location: Homeless Camp
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Return to the Overpass — Stumbling away in despair, the Boss finds his way back to the overpass where he first saw Bartleby. Characters: The Boss
Location: Overpass
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Memoir Pitch — The Boss resigns and pitches a memoir about Bartleby to a publishing agent. Characters: The Boss
Location: Publishing Office
The Aftermath & Infection
The Boss writes a memoir and pitches it to an agent who rejects it. In a final act of defiance, the Boss adopts Bartleby's phrase, completing his psychological transformation.
Key Events
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Memoir Pitch — The Boss resigns and pitches a memoir about Bartleby to a publishing agent. Characters: The Boss
Location: Publishing Office
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Agent's Refusal — The agent finds the subject too depressing and tells the Boss to leave. Characters: The Boss
Location: Publishing Office
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The Boss's Transformation — The Boss shouts 'I would prefer not to!' repeatedly, fully adopting Bartleby's passive resistance. Characters: The Boss
Location: Publishing Office
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Final Isolation Shot — The film closes on isolated office buildings atop large hills, mirroring the Boss's psychological state. Location: Cityscape
An adaptation of Herman Melville's short story "Bartleby, the Scrivener" told in the setting of a modern office.