Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Missing Patient
Emma discovers that George has vanished and cannot be found in the morgue. Learning that transport never collected him, she follows clues to a restricted research area.
Key Events
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George Vanishes from the Hospital — Emma discovers that her critically ill patient has vanished while she briefly checked another room. Characters: Emma Holloway, George Lockwood
Location: Hospital
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The Morgue Has No Answer — Hospital staff cannot find George in the morgue. Characters: Emma Holloway
Location: Hospital morgue
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No Transport Was Sent — Emma learns that the hospital transportation service never collected George. Characters: Emma Holloway
Location: Hospital
A Question of Consent
Marjorie explains that her team is testing whether a soul continues to exist after death. Emma objects that George never consented and orders treatment for his condition.
Key Events
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Emma Finds the Research Area — Following clues, Emma reaches a restricted research area and demands her patient back. Characters: Emma Holloway
Location: Restricted research area
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Marjorie Explains the Experiment — Marjorie identifies herself and describes an experiment testing whether a soul survives death. Characters: Emma Holloway, Marjorie Cane
Location: Restricted research area
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Sensors Surround the Chamber — The chamber is surrounded by sensors intended to detect even the smallest physical disturbance. Characters: Emma Holloway, Marjorie Cane
Location: Research chamber
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George's Condition Is Revealed — George has severe liver disease and a massive brain hemorrhage, and is not expected to survive the night. Characters: Emma Holloway, George Lockwood
Location: Hospital
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Emma Challenges Consent — Emma objects that George never consented to being used in the experiment. Characters: Emma Holloway, Marjorie Cane, George Lockwood
Location: Research area
The Apparition and the Sensors
The researchers seal George in the monitored chamber as his condition worsens. Emma says she sees him standing near his body, while Marjorie remains unable to see him and questions the account.
Key Events
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Emma Orders Treatment — Emma orders treatment to reduce pressure in George's brain and relieve his pain. Characters: Emma Holloway, George Lockwood
Location: Hospital
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The Chamber Is Sealed — The researchers seal George inside the chamber and begin recording. Characters: Marjorie Cane, George Lockwood
Location: Research chamber
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Emma Sees George Standing — As George worsens, Emma says she sees him standing near his body, apparently trapped. Characters: Emma Holloway, Marjorie Cane, George Lockwood
Location: Research chamber
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Marjorie Questions Emma's Account — Marjorie cannot see what Emma describes and suspects Emma may be mistaken. Characters: Emma Holloway, Marjorie Cane
Location: Research area
The Presence Remains
Sensors detect movement in the chamber, and something seems to approach and enter. After the fields are restored, George is gone, but the group senses a threatening presence and Emma prepares to enter the chamber.
Key Events
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A Disturbance Crosses the Chamber — Sensors register movement concentrated in a corner, apparently moving inward. Characters: Emma Holloway, Marjorie Cane, Dan
Location: Research chamber
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Something Appears to Enter — Something seems to approach and enter; Emma warns that it is not a divine presence collecting George. Characters: Emma Holloway, Marjorie Cane, Dan
Location: Research chamber
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The Chamber Fields Are Restored — The researchers shut down and restore the chamber's fields according to their protocols. Characters: Emma Holloway, Marjorie Cane, Dan
Location: Research chamber
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George Is Gone — After the fields are restored, George is gone, and Emma says she saw him make it out. Characters: Emma Holloway, George Lockwood
Location: Research chamber
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A Threatening Presence Remains — Several people feel a threatening presence, and Dan describes it as evil. Characters: Emma Holloway, Marjorie Cane, Dan
Location: Research area
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Emma Enters the Chamber — Emma insists on investigating, initially sees nothing, then tells Robbins to open the door. Characters: Emma Holloway, Marjorie Cane, Robbins, Dan
Location: Research chamber