Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Family Gathered
Rebecca prepares a picnic celebrating Nono and Barry's engagement. The gathering reflects her efforts to bring her crowded family together despite Poppy's reluctance and late arrivals.
Key Events
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Preparing for the Family Picnic — Rebecca prepares for the family picnic while trying to get Poppy ready. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Paul 'Poppy' Davitch
Location: Rebecca and Poppy's home
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The Engagement Picnic — The family gathers to celebrate Nono and Barry's engagement. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Nono, Barry
Location: Family picnic gathering
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Biddy Prepares the Food — Biddy prepares food as Rebecca arranges the gathering. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Biddy
Location: Family picnic gathering
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Relatives Arrive Late — Some relatives arrive late, while Poppy remains reluctant to attend. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Paul 'Poppy' Davitch
Location: Family picnic gathering
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The Family Baseball Game — Guests are expected to join a baseball game at the picnic. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch
Location: Family picnic gathering
The Past Reopens
Rebecca explains her family to Will and seeks him out through his university. She admits that she has drifted from her former self, while Will makes clear that her return has hurt him.
Key Events
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The Family Baseball Game — Guests are expected to join a baseball game at the picnic. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch
Location: Family picnic gathering
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Rebecca Explains Her Family — Rebecca explains her family's complicated connections to Will. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Dr. Will Allenby
Location: Family gathering
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Rebecca Seeks Out Will — Rebecca tracks Will down through his university and meets with him. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Dr. Will Allenby
Location: Unspecified meeting place
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Questioning Her Former Self — Rebecca tells Will she has drifted from her original self and questions who she has become. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Dr. Will Allenby
Location: Unspecified meeting place
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Will Names His Hurt — Will says he trusted Rebecca, making their reunion uncertain. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Dr. Will Allenby
Location: Unspecified meeting place
Family Demands Continue
Min goes into labor as Poppy handles calls and tries to keep the phone line free. Rebecca also attends to family life, admiring Peter's project and hearing a reminder to enjoy him as he grows.
Key Events
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Will Names His Hurt — Will says he trusted Rebecca, making their reunion uncertain. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Dr. Will Allenby
Location: Unspecified meeting place
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Min Goes into Labor — Min goes into labor while Poppy fields calls and tries to keep the phone line free. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Minerva "Min" Foo, Paul 'Poppy' Davitch
Location: Unspecified family location
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Rebecca Praises Peter's Project — Rebecca admires Peter's school project and hears that he is exceptionally bright. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch
Location: Unspecified family setting
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A Reminder to Enjoy Peter — A relative urges Rebecca to enjoy Peter as he grows up. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch
Location: Unspecified family setting
An Unfinished Reassessment
Rebecca tells Zeb that she intends to focus on herself through reading and exercise. At a later gathering, Will meets more of her relatives, while their renewed connection and Rebecca's reconsideration of her life remain unresolved.
Key Events
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A Reminder to Enjoy Peter — A relative urges Rebecca to enjoy Peter as he grows up. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch
Location: Unspecified family setting
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Plans for Personal Change — Rebecca tells Zeb she plans to read serious books and join a gym. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Zeb
Location: Unspecified setting
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Will Meets the Relatives — Will meets Rebecca's relatives and finds their connections difficult to follow. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Dr. Will Allenby
Location: Later family gathering
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An Unresolved Reunion — Will is still getting to know the family as Rebecca's renewed contact and self-questioning remain unresolved. Characters: Rebecca Holmes Davitch, Dr. Will Allenby
Location: Later family gathering