Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Move Toward Quiet
After being questioned about another attack and reminded of her earlier rape, Lisa rejects blame. She leaves New York for her relatives' home, where Walter helps her settle.
Key Events
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Lisa Is Questioned — Lisa is questioned after another attack and rejects blame directed at her. Characters: Lisa Roberts
Location: New York
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A Past Assault Recalled — An officer reminds Lisa that she was raped six months earlier. Characters: Lisa Roberts
Location: New York
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Lisa Rejects Blame — Lisa rejects the suggestion that attackers see her as an easy target. Characters: Lisa Roberts
Location: New York
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Move to a Quiet Town — Lisa leaves New York and settles at her aunt and uncle's home. Characters: Lisa Roberts, Walter
Location: A small town in Arizona
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Walter Helps Lisa Settle — Walter helps Lisa settle and looks after the property and its birds. Characters: Lisa Roberts, Walter
Location: Lisa's relatives' property
Conflicting Accounts
Lisa reports Randall's unwanted advances and considers whether to press charges. Steve presents Randall as a repeat offender, while Randall later challenges Steve's claims.
Key Events
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Walter Helps Lisa Settle — Walter helps Lisa settle and looks after the property and its birds. Characters: Lisa Roberts, Walter
Location: Lisa's relatives' property
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Randall Approaches Lisa — Lisa says Randall came on to her and pushed himself on her. Characters: Lisa Roberts, Randall Atkins
Location: Small town
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Steve Urges a Complaint — Steve says Randall has a criminal record and sexual offense history, persuading Lisa to consider charges. Characters: Lisa Roberts, Steve Smith
Location: Small town
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Randall Challenges Steve's Story — Randall insists Steve has been lying about him, prompting Lisa to doubt the officer. Characters: Lisa Roberts, Randall Atkins
Location: Small town
Trust Begins to Collapse
Steve makes Lisa appear unreliable, and she refuses to sign a statement accusing Randall. Her inquiry about evidence testing reveals that the local police do not perform the tests she expected.
Key Events
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Steve Undermines Lisa — Steve engineers situations that make Lisa appear unreliable; she refuses to sign his accusation statement. Characters: Lisa Roberts, Steve Smith
Location: Small town
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Evidence Testing Questioned — Lisa learns local police do not perform the tests she asks about. Characters: Lisa Roberts
Location: Local police department
Flight and Intervention
After a violent encounter leaves Randall injured, Lisa tries to escape as Steve pursues her and claims authority. Walter knocks Steve unconscious, briefly giving Lisa a chance to get away.
Key Events
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Randall Is Injured — A violent encounter leaves Randall injured as Lisa's trust in Steve collapses. Characters: Lisa Roberts, Randall Atkins, Steve Smith
Location: Small town
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Lisa Attempts Escape — Lisa tries to escape, but Steve pursues her and insists that he is the police. Characters: Lisa Roberts, Steve Smith
Location: Small town
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Walter Knocks Steve Out — Walter knocks Steve unconscious, giving Lisa an opportunity to get away. Characters: Lisa Roberts, Walter, Steve Smith
Location: Small town
A Threat Unmasked
Steve reveals that he knew Lisa's past, prepared paperwork against her, and intends to kill her. The excerpt ends with Lisa still in danger and Steve waiting for her or Randall to wake.
Key Events
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Steve Reveals His Plan — Steve says he knew Lisa's past, prepared paperwork against her, and intends to kill her. Characters: Lisa Roberts, Steve Smith
Location: Small town
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Lisa Remains in Danger — The excerpt ends with Steve waiting for Lisa or Randall to wake. Characters: Lisa Roberts, Steve Smith, Randall Atkins
Location: Small town