Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Storms Over the Wilderness
Two Los Angeles couples begin a camping trip, but Sharon and Teddi are separated from the men by a storm. Ghostly presences appear near their improvised campsite.
Key Events
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Couples Plan Wilderness Trip — Two Los Angeles couples plan a camping trip to escape the city. Characters: Steve, Sharon, Charlie, Teddi
Location: Los Angeles
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Women Depart First — Sharon and Teddi leave first while Steve and Charlie plan to follow later. Characters: Sharon, Teddi, Steve, Charlie
Location: Sierra Nevada wilderness
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Thunderstorm Strikes — A sudden thunderstorm interrupts the women's hike toward the planned campsite. Characters: Sharon, Teddi
Location: Wilderness trail
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Camp Beneath Waterfall — The women establish camp beside the river beneath a waterfall. Characters: Sharon, Teddi
Location: Base of a waterfall
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Ghost Children Watch — The ghost children observe Sharon and Teddi from a nearby cave. Characters: John, Jennifer, Sharon, Teddi
Location: Cave near the waterfall
The Children's Warning
The children's ghosts watch the women and reveal that their father is approaching. John follows the warning to the river and kills Teddi while Sharon escapes.
Key Events
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Mother's Apparition Appears — Mother's ghost asks where her children are, terrifying both women before disappearing. Characters: Mother, Sharon, Teddi
Location: Waterfall campsite
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Men Become Lost — Steve and Charlie trail the women but become lost as darkness falls. Characters: Steve, Charlie
Location: Nighttime wilderness
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Children Report Camp — The ghost children tell John that two young women are camping by the river. Characters: John, Jennifer, John
Location: John's cave
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Daddy Is Coming — The ghost children wake Sharon and warn her that their father is approaching. Characters: John, Jennifer, Sharon, Teddi
Location: Waterfall campsite
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John Kills Teddi — John stalks Teddi after Sharon flees and kills her at the campsite. Characters: John, Teddi, Sharon
Location: Riverside campsite
The Cave of Secrets
Steve and Charlie take refuge in John's cave, unaware that the meat he serves is Teddi's flesh. John recounts the abusive family history while concealing the full horror of his actions.
Key Events
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Sharon Escapes Through River — Sharon eludes John by jumping into the river and escaping from the campsite. Characters: Sharon, John
Location: River
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Men Enter Furnished Cave — Steve and Charlie shelter from the rain and find a furnished cave with meat roasting. Characters: Steve, Charlie
Location: John's cave
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Ghosts Visit the Men — The ghost children appear to the men, vanish, and are dismissed by John as visitors. Characters: Steve, Charlie, John, Jennifer, John
Location: John's cave
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Cannibalistic Meal Served — John offers meat that is secretly Teddi's flesh to Steve and Charlie. Characters: John, Steve, Charlie, Teddi
Location: John's cave
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John Reveals Family History — John describes Mother's abuse, affairs, murder, and the children's tragic decline. Characters: John, Steve, Charlie, Mother, John, Jennifer
Location: John's cave
Ghosts Reveal the Past
The men search for the women, Steve is injured, and the children explain their deaths and their mother's continued supernatural abuse. Their warnings help Sharon remain ahead of John.
Key Events
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Search Parties Separate — Steve and Charlie leave the cave and separate while searching for the women. Characters: Steve, Charlie, Sharon
Location: Wilderness
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Steve Breaks His Leg — Steve falls while climbing over rocks and breaks his leg. Characters: Steve
Location: Rocky wilderness
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Children Reveal Their Deaths — The children reveal that they are ghosts and explain their family's violence and shared suicide. Characters: Sharon, John, Jennifer, Mother, John
Location: Wilderness
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Ghosts Guide Sharon — The children attempt to lead Sharon toward the injured Steve. Characters: Sharon, John, Jennifer, Steve
Location: Forest trail
The Hermit's Last Hunt
John kills Charlie and threatens Sharon while butchering the corpse. The children spare Sharon, allowing her to reach Steve and ambush John during the final pursuit.
Key Events
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John Attacks Charlie — Mother's ghost confronts Charlie, then John attacks and kills him during a violent fight. Characters: John, Charlie, Mother
Location: Wilderness
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John Butchers Charlie — Sharon discovers John butchering Charlie's corpse, and John threatens to kill her. Characters: John, Charlie, Sharon
Location: Forest clearing
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Children Spare Sharon — The ghost children persuade John not to kill Sharon because they consider her their friend. Characters: John, Sharon, John, Jennifer
Location: Forest clearing
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Sharon Stabs John — Sharon ambushes and stabs John to death while he pursues the injured Steve. Characters: Sharon, Steve, John
Location: Wilderness near Steve
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Ghosts Bid Farewell — The children say farewell to Sharon and Steve before Mother's apparition asks where they are and vanishes. Characters: Sharon, Steve, John, Jennifer, Mother
Location: Wilderness