Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Arrival in an Unfamiliar Place
Butch reaches California in a repaired but battered Mercedes, having traded away his pickup. His complaints about evasive people and the carefree beach setting reveal his uncertainty about what lies ahead.
Key Events
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Butch Reaches California — Butch arrives in California after repairing the Mercedes and trading away his pickup. Characters: Butch
Location: California road
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Uncertainty on the Road — Butch complains that local people are evasive and difficult to understand. Characters: Butch
Location: California road
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Beachside Contrast — The carefree beach atmosphere contrasts with Butch's uncertainty about what comes next. Characters: Butch
Location: Beach
Susan's Troubled Recollections
Butch enters Susan's orbit as she recalls addiction, drug use, and her conflicted attachment to Paul. Her hopes of escape sit uneasily beside confused plans, exhaustion, and Geoffrey's assistance.
Key Events
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Susan Enters Butch's Orbit — Butch's path brings him into contact with Susan and her memories. Characters: Butch, Susan Superstar
Location: Not specified
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Susan Recalls Speed Addiction — Susan recalls becoming addicted to speed. Characters: Susan Superstar
Location: Not specified
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Susan Describes Heroin Use — Susan speaks about later using heroin. Characters: Susan Superstar
Location: Not specified
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Paul Haunts Susan's Memories — Susan recalls her conflicted attachment to Paul, a dealer whose presence still haunts her. Characters: Susan Superstar, Paul
Location: Not specified
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Dream of a Quiet Sea — Susan sometimes dreams of escaping to a quiet place by the sea. Characters: Susan Superstar
Location: A quiet place by the sea
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Confused Plans and Exhaustion — Susan talks about fashion work and a United Nations trip as Butch notices her confusion and exhaustion. Characters: Susan Superstar, Butch
Location: Not specified
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Geoffrey Attends Susan — Geoffrey helps attend to Susan. Characters: Geoffrey, Susan Superstar
Location: Not specified
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Special Treatment for Susan — Susan receives special treatment from Dr. Braun for what others call permanent brain damage. Characters: Dr. Braun, Susan Superstar
Location: Not specified
Treatment and Criminal Tensions
Susan receives special treatment from Dr. Braun for a condition others describe as permanent brain damage. Elsewhere, criminal associates dispute responsibility for a woman's escape, and Mister Verdecchio orders an investigation without violence.
Key Events
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Criminals Debate an Escape — Criminal associates argue over responsibility for a woman's escape.
Location: Not specified
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Order to Investigate — Mister Verdecchio orders his men to investigate without using violence.
Location: Not specified
Paul's Jailhouse Defiance
Paul faces several narcotics charges, while a discussion considers whether legal maneuvering could secure his release. Tom is sent to investigate and meets Paul in jail, where Paul rejects the visitor's apparent priestly role and insists on his innocence and spiritual freedom.
Key Events
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Paul Held in Jail — Paul is held on several narcotics charges, including a selling charge that could bring a severe sentence. Characters: Paul
Location: Jail
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Release Considered — A man discussing Paul's case considers legal maneuvering but doubts Manhattan would resolve Paul's deeper problems. Characters: Paul
Location: Not specified
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Tom Sent to Investigate — Tom is sent to look into Paul and told to improve his appearance before approaching the matter. Characters: Tom, Paul
Location: Not specified
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Paul Rejects the Visitor — Paul recognizes the visitor as a drummer from the Too Far Gone and insists he is not a priest. Characters: Paul, Tom
Location: Jail
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Paul Declares His Innocence — Paul remains defiant, declaring that he is innocent and that his soul remains free. Characters: Paul
Location: Jail