Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Catastrophe in the Void
A mining accident kills two crew members, leaving Troy Holloway as the sole survivor. He evacuates aboard the EEV Khapera 2 with Milton's corpse, only to discover the emergency beacon is non-functional.
Key Events
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Mining Accident — Space mining accident occurs, killing Milton and Lieutenant Harris. Characters: Troy Holloway, Milton
Location: Aten 2024 DEC
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Emergency Evacuation — Holloway evacuates with Milton's corpse aboard the EEV. Characters: Troy Holloway, Milton
Location: EEV Khapera 2
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Beacon Failure — Holloway awakens and discovers the EEV beacon is down. Characters: Troy Holloway
Location: EEV Khapera 2
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First Contact — Holloway establishes contact with Commander Roberts of Hathor 18. Characters: Troy Holloway, Commander Roberts
Location: Deep Space
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Medical Assessment — Roberts questions Holloway about his concussion and injuries. Characters: Troy Holloway, Commander Roberts
Location: EEV Khapera 2
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Position Triangulation — Roberts triangulates the EEV's position using the PLB. Characters: Commander Roberts, Troy Holloway
Location: Hathor 18 / EEV
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EEV Khapera 2 — The damaged escape vehicle carrying Holloway and Milton's corpse. Characters: Troy Holloway, Milton
Location: EEV Khapera 2
Descent Toward the Sun
Commander Roberts establishes radio contact and triangulates the EEV's position using the PLB. She reveals the devastating truth that the damaged vessel is on an irreversible course directly toward the Sun.
Key Events
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Position Triangulation — Roberts triangulates the EEV's position using the PLB. Characters: Commander Roberts, Troy Holloway
Location: Hathor 18 / EEV
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Solar Trajectory Revealed — Roberts informs Holloway the EEV is on a course for the Sun. Characters: Commander Roberts, Troy Holloway
Location: Hathor 18 / EEV
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System Damage Report — Roberts details EEV damage including temperature control and radiation leak. Characters: Commander Roberts, Troy Holloway
Location: Hathor 18 / EEV
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Critical Repairs Begin — Holloway begins making repairs, sustaining multiple injuries. Characters: Troy Holloway
Location: EEV Khapera 2
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Hull Compromise — The EEV window begins to crack under solar proximity. Characters: Troy Holloway
Location: EEV Khapera 2
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External Repair Mission — Holloway performs repairs outside the ship as oxygen drops. Characters: Troy Holloway
Location: EEV Exterior
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Solar Proximity Threat — The Sun looms closer, driving the EEV's trajectory and increasing heat. Characters: Troy Holloway
Location: Sun
The Unyielding Mission
Holloway sustains injuries while attempting critical external repairs as the hull cracks and oxygen drops. He pleads with Roberts to abort the rescue to save her crew, but she refuses due to strict corporate orders.
Key Events
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External Repair Mission — Holloway performs repairs outside the ship as oxygen drops. Characters: Troy Holloway
Location: EEV Exterior
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Plea to Abort — Holloway urges Roberts to turn back to save her crew. Characters: Troy Holloway, Commander Roberts
Location: EEV / Hathor 18
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Mission Orders Refused — Roberts refuses to abort, citing strict orders to rescue at least one crew member. Characters: Commander Roberts, Troy Holloway
Location: Hathor 18
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Oxygen Depletion — Holloway's oxygen levels critically decrease, causing drowsiness. Characters: Troy Holloway
Location: EEV Khapera 2
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Final Encouragement — Roberts tells Holloway not to give up as she refuses to abandon him. Characters: Commander Roberts, Troy Holloway
Location: Hathor 18 / EEV
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Window Shatter Preparation — Holloway informs Roberts he will exit through the window. Characters: Troy Holloway
Location: EEV Khapera 2
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Solar Proximity Threat — The Sun looms closer, driving the EEV's trajectory and increasing heat. Characters: Troy Holloway
Location: Sun
Final Desperation
As oxygen completely depletes, Roberts aligns her ship in front of the EEV window per Holloway's instructions. Holloway declares he is going home, and the window shatters, concluding the rescue attempt.
Key Events
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Window Shatter Preparation — Holloway informs Roberts he will exit through the window. Characters: Troy Holloway
Location: EEV Khapera 2
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Final Alignment — Roberts positions Hathor 18 in front of the EEV window as instructed. Characters: Commander Roberts, Troy Holloway
Location: Hathor 18 / EEV
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Air Depletion — Holloway's air levels completely deplete as he readies himself. Characters: Troy Holloway
Location: EEV Khapera 2
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Going Home Declaration — Holloway says aloud he is going home before the window fully shatters. Characters: Troy Holloway
Location: EEV Khapera 2
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Rescue Attempt Conclusion — The window shatters, marking the end of the rescue sequence. Characters: Commander Roberts, Troy Holloway
Location: Hathor 18 / EEV
Following an accident, an Engineer of an asteroid mining company endures the extreme limits – both physical and psychological – of human survival, trapped inside an escape pod as he helplessly idles towards the Sun.