Plot Analysis Summary
A young bath attendant's obsessive desire for Susan escalates from workplace fascination into jealousy, possession, and fatal violence.
Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A New Life at the Baths
Mike leaves school and begins working at a public bath. Susan trains him in the workplace's intimate customer routines, while his discomfort gradually turns into fascination.
Key Events
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Mike Leaves School — Mike leaves school at fifteen to earn his keep. Characters: Mike
Location: East London
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A Job at the Baths — Mike finds work at a public bath in East London. Characters: Mike
Location: Public baths
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Susan Trains Mike — Susan trains Mike and explains the baths' flirtatious tipping practices. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: Public baths
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The First Client — A female client sexualizes Mike, leaving him feeling violated and unsure about accepting the tip. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: Public baths
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Mike Falls for Susan — Mike becomes infatuated with Susan after their early encounters at work. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: Public baths
Desire and Discovery
Mike defends Susan and becomes increasingly attracted to her. He then learns about her engagement to Chris and her affair with the gym teacher.
Key Events
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Mike Falls for Susan — Mike becomes infatuated with Susan after their early encounters at work. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: Public baths
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Poolside Fight — Mike fights boys making vulgar comments about Susan and falls into the pool. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: Public baths
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Susan Watches Mike — Susan spies on Mike naked while he puts on his dried clothes. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: Boiler room
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Susan's Engagement — Mike learns that Susan has a well-off fiancé named Chris. Characters: Mike, Susan, Chris
Location: London
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The Secret Affair — Mike discovers Susan's affair with his married former gym teacher. Characters: Mike, Susan, Gym Teacher
Location: Public baths
Public Intimacy
At the cinema, Mike touches Susan while Chris is present, and Susan secretly kisses him. Mike's brief happiness intensifies his fixation when he cannot join the couple at the nightclub.
Key Events
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Cinema Betrayal — Mike touches Susan behind Chris, but Susan secretly kisses Mike after accusing him to Chris. Characters: Mike, Susan, Chris
Location: Soft-core adult movie theatre
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Waiting Outside Soho — Mike cannot afford the nightclub and waits outside while Susan and Chris go inside. Characters: Mike, Susan, Chris
Location: Soho nightclub
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The Stolen Cutout — Mike steals a stripper cutout resembling Susan from outside a business. Characters: Mike
Location: Soho
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Rage on the Tube — Mike confronts Susan about the cutout and leaves her on the Tube during a tantrum. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: London Underground
The Image and the Diamond
Mike steals a cutout resembling Susan and turns it into a substitute for her. His jealousy leads to car sabotage, violence, and a desperate search for Susan's engagement diamond.
Key Events
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Rage on the Tube — Mike confronts Susan about the cutout and leaves her on the Tube during a tantrum. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: London Underground
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A Substitute Susan — Mike swims naked with the cutout and imagines that he is holding the actual Susan. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: Closed public baths
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Sabotaged Car Tyres — Mike plants glass for the gym teacher's car, and the tyres puncture when Susan drives it. Characters: Mike, Susan, Gym Teacher
Location: Road near the public baths
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The Lost Engagement Diamond — Susan strikes Mike, knocking the diamond from her engagement ring into the snow. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: Snow-covered street
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Accusation at the Baths — They melt collected snow; Susan accuses the gym teacher of grooming her when he comes for his keys. Characters: Mike, Susan, Gym Teacher
Location: Closed public baths
Water Without Escape
Mike withholds the diamond before returning it, and Susan briefly stays with him. When she tries to leave, his possessiveness causes the fatal pool accident.
Key Events
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The Diamond Bargain — Mike finds the diamond, holds it on his tongue, and withholds it before giving it back. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: Empty pool
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Susan Chooses to Stay — Susan begins unzipping her clothes, Mike backs down, and she reconsiders leaving after their sexual encounter. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: Empty pool
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The Flooded Pool — Mike swings the lamp into Susan; she falls into the filling pool as the live wire dangles in the water. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: Empty swimming pool
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Underwater Embrace — Mike embraces the bleeding Susan underwater while the pool continues filling around the live wire. Characters: Mike, Susan
Location: Flooded swimming pool