Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Date Behind the Badge
Two women meet detectives at a restaurant and hear stories about police work. The narrative then shifts to a police lineup and increasingly coercive questioning.
Key Events
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Restaurant Date — Marcia Stillwell and Judy Grundy meet two detectives for a date. Characters: Marcia Stillwell, Judy Grundy
Location: Restaurant
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Police Work Recounted — The detectives begin describing their work to the two women. Characters: Marcia Stillwell, Judy Grundy
Location: Restaurant
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Police Lineup Begins — The story shifts to a lineup of suspects at the station.
Location: Police Station
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Suspects Displayed — John Francis appears among several suspects in the lineup. Characters: John Francis
Location: Police Station
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Suspects Questioned — Officers question suspects individually after the lineup. Characters: John Francis
Location: Police Station
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Lawyers Ignored — Officers ignore requests to see a lawyer and threaten suspects.
Location: Police Station
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Physical Intimidation — The questioning escalates as officers lay hands on several men.
Location: Police Station
Interrogation Without Restraint
Suspects are questioned, threatened, and physically intimidated at the station. Further interrogations expose the precinct's mixture of authority, sexual tension, and cynical talk.
Key Events
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Physical Intimidation — The questioning escalates as officers lay hands on several men.
Location: Police Station
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Return To Restaurant — The two women and the detectives briefly return to the restaurant scene. Characters: Marcia Stillwell, Judy Grundy
Location: Restaurant
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Whipping Party Questioned — A lieutenant questions three members of a sexual whipping party.
Location: Police Precinct
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Flirtatious Interrogation — A young woman from the group flirts with the questioning lieutenant.
Location: Police Precinct
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Murder Claim Revisited — The lieutenant questions the man who claims to have killed his wife.
Location: Police Precinct
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Gang Members Challenged — Two Irish gang members prompt a speech about criminality and religion.
Location: Police Precinct
The Inspection Performance
The Mayor arrives to inspect the precinct and hears complaints from suspects. The lieutenant evades accountability through lies and charm before the Mayor is called away.
Key Events
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Mayor Arrives — The Mayor arrives to inspect the police precinct. Characters: Mayor
Location: Police Precinct
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Suspect Complaints — The Mayor questions suspects who report mistreatment by the police. Characters: Mayor, John Francis
Location: Police Precinct
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Inspection Deflected — The lieutenant lies and charms his way through the Mayor's questions. Characters: Mayor
Location: Police Precinct
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Mayor Called Away — The Mayor leaves after being called away for other business. Characters: Mayor
Location: Police Precinct
A Disorderly Night
After leaving the precinct, the lieutenant learns of his wife's infidelity and responds by bringing a suspect into the detectives' social evening. The encounter ends in drunken flirtation, departure, and marital reconciliation.
Key Events
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Evening Departure — The lieutenant and detectives leave the building for the evening.
Location: Police Precinct
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Marital Confession — The lieutenant's wife tells him she has cheated on him.
Location: Lieutenant's Home
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Drunken Restaurant Visit — The intoxicated lieutenant arrives with a sexual-offense suspect, upsetting the dates. Characters: Marcia Stillwell, Judy Grundy
Location: Restaurant
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Dates Leave — The detectives and their dates eventually leave after the lieutenant's request. Characters: Marcia Stillwell, Judy Grundy
Location: Restaurant
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Drunken Flirtation — The lieutenant spends the evening drunkenly flirting with the suspect.
Location: Restaurant
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Wife Ends Encounter — The lieutenant's wife arrives and tells the woman to leave.
Location: Restaurant
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Marital Reconciliation — The lieutenant reconciles with his wife and reflects on the evening.
Location: Restaurant