Plot Analysis Summary
A grieving young woman resists household oppression, disrupts a marriage scheme, and experiences a brief romance before midnight separates her from the prince.
Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A House Without Comfort
Zezolla grieves her mother while Claudette becomes the dominant figure in the household. Zezolla is reduced to servant status and suffers cruel treatment.
Key Events
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Zezolla Mourns Her Mother — Zezolla continues grieving after her mother's death. Characters: Zezolla
Location: Family household
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Claudette Enters the Household — Claudette becomes the dominant new wife in the household. Characters: Claudette, Zezolla
Location: Family household
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Zezolla Becomes A Servant — Claudette treats Zezolla cruelly and makes her work as a servant. Characters: Claudette, Zezolla
Location: Family household
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Claudette Discovers Poverty — Claudette discovers that the household is not wealthy. Characters: Claudette
Location: Family household
Poison Beneath The Roof
Claudette discovers that the household is not wealthy and responds by slowly poisoning her husband. Zezolla finds limited emotional refuge through Mab.
Key Events
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The Poisoning Begins — Claudette slowly poisons her husband after learning he is not rich. Characters: Claudette
Location: Family household
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Zezolla Finds Solace — Zezolla's friendship with Mab offers relief from household cruelty. Characters: Zezolla, Mab
Location: Behind the waterfall
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Mab Lives By Water — Mab is introduced as a mermaid-like lady living behind a waterfall. Characters: Mab
Location: Behind the waterfall
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The Queen Pressures Her Son — The queen is frustrated because her son refuses to choose a wife.
Location: Royal court
A Scheme For The Ball
The royal family faces pressure because the prince refuses to choose a wife. Claudette plans to find a new husband, while Zezolla decides to undermine that plan.
Key Events
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The Prince Rejects Romance — The prince shows no interest in love or choosing a wife.
Location: Royal court
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Claudette Plans The Ball — Claudette pursues a plan to find a new husband at the ball. Characters: Claudette, Regan, Zezolla
Location: Family household
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Zezolla Chooses Sabotage — Zezolla decides to attend the ball to sabotage Claudette's plan. Characters: Zezolla, Claudette
Location: Family household
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The Ball Begins — Zezolla attends the ball alongside the household group. Characters: Claudette, Regan, Zezolla
Location: The ball
Love In The Ballroom
Zezolla attends the ball and distracts older men from Claudette. The prince notices her and immediately develops romantic feelings.
Key Events
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Zezolla Distracts Older Men — Zezolla dances older men away from Claudette. Characters: Claudette, Regan, Zezolla
Location: The ball
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The Prince Notices Zezolla — The prince sees Zezolla and falls in love at first sight. Characters: Zezolla
Location: The ball
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A Sudden Connection — Zezolla and the prince share an immediate romantic connection. Characters: Zezolla
Location: The ball
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The Lovers Share Moments — The two lovers spend only a few precious moments together. Characters: Zezolla
Location: The ball
Midnight Into The Pool
Zezolla and the prince share only a few precious moments before midnight interrupts them. She falls into and jumps back into a pool as the clock strikes twelve.
Key Events
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Midnight Approaches — The approaching stroke of midnight forces the encounter toward an end. Characters: Zezolla
Location: The ball
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Zezolla Falls Into Water — Zezolla falls into a pool as the clock strikes midnight. Characters: Zezolla
Location: Pool
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Zezolla Jumps Back — Zezolla jumps back into the pool when midnight arrives. Characters: Zezolla
Location: Pool
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The Ball Encounter Ends — The brief romantic encounter ends abruptly after midnight. Characters: Zezolla
Location: Pool
Zezolla and her family live mid 20th century, where fashion is practically everything. As her father is won over by a selfish woman named Claudette, Cinderella must keep her new step-mother from murdering the only family she has left. Add in an anti-social mermaid literally living in a cave, a bored prince with an ear for rock n' roll, and the glamour of the 1950's and one'll find that this story can't grow old.