Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Bachelor's Dilemma
Buddy Evans, a confirmed bachelor, decides to become a father and initiates a surrogate search with assistants Larry and Kurt. He navigates awkward interviews and mistaken identities before finding a candidate.
Key Events
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Bachelor Lifestyle — Buddy manages events and lives with housekeeper Celia. Characters: Buddy Evans, Celia
Location: New York City Apartment
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Fatherhood Decision — Buddy decides he is ready to be a father. Characters: Buddy Evans
Location: New York City Apartment
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Surrogate Search Plan — Buddy decides to hire a surrogate mother for a son. Characters: Buddy Evans
Location: New York City Apartment
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Interview Campaign — Larry and Kurt help Buddy conduct surrogate interviews. Characters: Buddy Evans, Larry, Kurt
Location: Various Locations
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Mistaken Identity — Buddy mistakes Jenny for a surrogate applicant. Characters: Buddy Evans, Jenny Lofton
Location: Interview Setting
The Surrogate Agreement
Buddy meets Maggie, a waitress with Paris dreams, who agrees to the surrogate arrangement. They attempt conception, and Maggie eventually becomes pregnant, moving into Buddy's apartment.
Key Events
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Mistaken Identity — Buddy mistakes Jenny for a surrogate applicant. Characters: Buddy Evans, Jenny Lofton
Location: Interview Setting
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Coffee Shop Meeting — Buddy meets waitress and aspiring musician Maggie. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Local Coffee Shop
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Surrogate Agreement — Maggie offers to bear Buddy's child for Paris funds. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Local Coffee Shop
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Conception Attempts — Buddy and Maggie attempt to conceive with little success. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Buddy's Apartment
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Seductive Role-Play — Maggie engages in seductive role-playing to spark intimacy. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Buddy's Apartment
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Pregnancy Confirmed — Maggie becomes pregnant and moves into Buddy's apartment. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Buddy's Apartment
Conflict and Resentment
Buddy's obsessive supervision and continued dating life cause Maggie to resent his neglect. She grows attached to the baby, while Buddy faces anger and fear over potentially losing his son.
Key Events
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Pregnancy Confirmed — Maggie becomes pregnant and moves into Buddy's apartment. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Buddy's Apartment
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Obsessive Supervision — Buddy obsessively monitors Maggie's diet and exercise. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Buddy's Apartment
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Neglect and Dating — Buddy pays little attention to Maggie while dating others. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: New York City
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Maggie's Resentment — Maggie resents neglect and wants to keep the baby. Characters: Maggie, Buddy Evans
Location: Buddy's Apartment
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Buddy's Anger — Buddy becomes angry at the thought of losing his son. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Buddy's Apartment
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Developing Romance — Buddy begins developing genuine romantic feelings for Maggie. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Buddy's Apartment
Love and Family
Overcoming fear and resentment, Buddy develops genuine romantic feelings for Maggie. They marry, welcome three daughters, and transform their transactional arrangement into a lasting family.
Key Events
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Developing Romance — Buddy begins developing genuine romantic feelings for Maggie. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Buddy's Apartment
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Fear of Loss — Buddy fears losing the child after birth. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Hospital
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Marriage Proposal — Buddy and Maggie decide to marry. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Buddy's Apartment
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Family Formation — The couple marries and has three daughters. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Family Home
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Paris Dream Deferred — Maggie's Paris plans are replaced by family life. Characters: Maggie
Location: Family Home
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Legacy of Fatherhood — The couple settles into a life as parents to three daughters. Characters: Buddy Evans, Maggie
Location: Family Home
Buddy Evans manages events at Madison Square Garden in New York City. He is a confirmed bachelor who lives with his housekeeper Celia. After coming into contact with several children, Buddy decides that he is ready to be a father. Buddy decides to hire a surrogate mother in the hope of having a son.