Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Broken Home
Luli's childhood is defined by parental neglect and conflict. After her mother abandons the family, Luli decides to run away to Las Vegas.
Key Events
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Thirteenth Birthday Gift — Luli receives a revolver on her 13th birthday. Characters: Luli McMullen
Location: Palmyra, Nebraska
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Mother's Abandonment — Luli's mother runs off with Lux, leaving the family. Characters: Luli McMullen, Lux
Location: Family Home
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Father's Departure — Father leaves after hearing about the mother's departure. Characters: Luli McMullen
Location: Family Home
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Vegas Commercial Inspiration — Luli sees a Las Vegas ad and decides to run away. Characters: Luli McMullen
Location: Living Room
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Hitchhiking with Eddie — Luli gets a ride from erratic drifter Eddie. Characters: Luli McMullen, Eddie Kreezer
Location: Highway
Road to Vegas
Luli navigates dangerous hitchhiking and forms a pragmatic bond with Glenda. Their journey includes a store robbery and a tense stay at a bowling alley.
Key Events
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Bonding with Glenda — Luli helps Glenda rob a store, forging a bond. Characters: Luli McMullen, Glenda
Location: Convenience Store
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Bowling Alley Stay — They spend the night in a trailer behind a bowling alley. Characters: Luli McMullen, Glenda, Angel
Location: Trailer
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Lloyd's House Visit — Glenda takes Luli to her husband Lloyd's home. Characters: Luli McMullen, Glenda
Location: Lloyd's House
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Eddie's Employment Revealed — Luli discovers Eddie works as Lloyd's bartender. Characters: Luli McMullen, Eddie Kreezer
Location: Lloyd's House
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Bar Confrontation — Eddie's pool hustle fails, leading to a violent bathroom attack. Characters: Luli McMullen, Eddie Kreezer
Location: Local Bar
Nightmare Unfolds
Eddie's true nature emerges as he betrays Luli, assaults her, and kidnaps her. Glenda attempts a rescue, leading to a fatal shootout.
Key Events
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Bar Confrontation — Eddie's pool hustle fails, leading to a violent bathroom attack. Characters: Luli McMullen, Eddie Kreezer
Location: Local Bar
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Motel Betrayal — Eddie reveals Glenda paid him to take Luli away. Characters: Luli McMullen, Eddie Kreezer
Location: Motel Room
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Cornfield Assault — Eddie chases and rapes Luli after she leaves the truck. Characters: Luli McMullen, Eddie Kreezer
Location: Cornfield
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Cabin Captivity — Luli wakes tied up with short black hair. Characters: Luli McMullen, Eddie Kreezer
Location: Rented Cabin
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Beau's Brief Visit — Proprietor Beau visits, speaks briefly, and leaves. Characters: Luli McMullen, Eddie Kreezer, Beau
Location: Rented Cabin
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Glenda's Rescue — Glenda arrives to untie Luli, revealing Eddie's past. Characters: Luli McMullen, Glenda, Eddie Kreezer
Location: Rented Cabin
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Glenda's Death — Eddie accidentally shoots Glenda dead with Luli's gun. Characters: Luli McMullen, Glenda, Eddie Kreezer
Location: Rented Cabin
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Luli's Retaliation — Luli picks up the gun and kills Eddie. Characters: Luli McMullen, Eddie Kreezer
Location: Rented Cabin
Path to Redemption
Beau provides sanctuary and offers Luli a chance at a new life. After a disillusioning call home, Luli chooses to pursue adoption in Los Angeles.
Key Events
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Awakening at Beau's — Luli wakes up safe; Beau offers to cover up the crime. Characters: Luli McMullen, Beau
Location: Beau's House
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Phone Call Home — Luli learns her mother sold the land and father left. Characters: Luli McMullen
Location: Bus Station
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Bus Departure — Luli boards a bus to Nebraska, feeling disillusioned. Characters: Luli McMullen
Location: Bus Station
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Beau's Note Discovery — Luli finds Beau's sister's address in her sketchbook. Characters: Luli McMullen
Location: Bus
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Choice for Los Angeles — Luli returns to the station and boards a bus to LA. Characters: Luli McMullen
Location: Bus Station
A pistol-packing teen meets an unstable rebel and a cocaine-snorting drifter as she hitchhikes her way out West.