Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Courtroom and Its Stakes
Craig faces contempt proceedings because he continued construction after a Stop Work order. The Commission seeks demolition, and Craig acknowledges the possibility of jail.
Key Events
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Contempt Hearing — Craig appears in court for continuing construction despite a Stop Work order. Characters: Craig Morrison
Location: Court
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Demolition Requested — The Building Commission cites 26 violations and asks that the house be demolished. Characters: Craig Morrison
Location: Court
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Craig Faces Jail Risk — Craig acknowledges that the contempt case could send him to jail. Characters: Craig Morrison
Location: Court
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The Signed Baseball — Craig recalls a treasured baseball from a childhood game with his father. Characters: Craig Morrison
Location: Court
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Reflections on Life — Craig reflects on age, death, and what people can understand about life. Characters: Craig Morrison
Location: Court
Building by His Own Methods
Craig's goal is to build a suitable house for Irene, but permitting and inspection requirements create conflict. Rick challenges the materials and structural work, while Craig defends his traditional methods.
Key Events
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A House for Irene — Craig builds a house for Irene and insists they move in only when it is ready. Characters: Craig Morrison, Irene Morrison
Location: House construction site
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Permit Requirements — Officials require plans and inspections as Craig applies for a permit. Characters: Craig Morrison
Location: Building Department
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Craig Questions the Rules — Craig questions the rules while noting that local houses have stood for centuries. Characters: Craig Morrison
Location: Building Department
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Framing Inspection Dispute — Rick objects to unstamped lumber and structural work lacking engineer approval. Characters: Craig Morrison, Rick Daigle
Location: House construction site
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Traditional Joinery Defense — Craig defends the seasoned wood and methods learned from his shipwright father. Characters: Craig Morrison, Rick Daigle
Location: House construction site
Evidence Without Resolution
Craig's representatives present inspection, engineering, reinforcement, and builder-report evidence. The Building Department still refuses to lift the Stop Work order until all 26 violations are resolved.
Key Events
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Repairs and Documentation — Evidence shows the lumber was inspected, specifications redrawn, and reinforcements added. Characters: Craig Morrison
Location: House construction site
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Builder's Favorable Report — Craig's representatives submit a favorable report from an experienced builder. Characters: Craig Morrison
Location: Building Department
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Stop Work Remains — The department refuses to lift the order until all 26 violations are resolved. Characters: Craig Morrison
Location: Building Department
Irene's Need and Craig's Persistence
Irene's broken hip and need for a walker make the old home unsuitable. Craig resumes construction without telling Gary, who warns him about the serious case, and the excerpt ends with a reporter's call.
Key Events
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Irene Breaks Her Hip — Irene breaks her hip and will need a walker; the old home is no longer suitable. Characters: Craig Morrison, Irene Morrison
Location: Old home
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Construction Resumes — Craig resumes work without telling Gary, hoping to finish before Irene comes home. Characters: Craig Morrison
Location: House construction site
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Gary Warns Craig — Gary warns Craig that the case is serious, but Craig believes the house can be finished in time. Characters: Craig Morrison, Gary
Location: Unspecified
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Reporter Calls — Marty calls after hearing about the dispute; Craig answers, and the outcome remains unresolved. Characters: Craig Morrison, Marty Klinkenberg
Location: Unspecified