Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Marriage Under Strain
The story begins with wartime courtship, marriage, and a later suburban life. Illness and a heat wave create an increasingly hostile domestic atmosphere.
Key Events
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Wartime Nursing Service — During World War II, a woman works as a nurse in a naval hospital.
Location: Naval hospital
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Military Courtship — The nurse dates a military doctor and meets his pilot friend.
Location: Naval hospital
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Unexpected Romance — The nurse and the pilot friend fall in love.
Location: Wartime setting
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Marriage — The nurse and the pilot marry before the story moves years forward.
Location: Wartime setting
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Years Later — Years later, the married couple live in a suburban house.
Location: Suburban house
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Bedridden Husband — The husband is gravely ill with a heart condition and confined to bed.
Location: Bedroom
Delusion Takes Hold
The bedridden husband's mental state deteriorates while his physician recognizes the need for psychological help. Suspicion turns ordinary medical care into an imagined murder conspiracy.
Key Events
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Bedridden Husband — The husband is gravely ill with a heart condition and confined to bed.
Location: Bedroom
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Doctor Returns — The former military doctor becomes the ill man's personal physician.
Location: Suburban house
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Heat Wave Delirium — During a heat wave, the sick man becomes increasingly delusional and hostile.
Location: Bedroom
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Psychological Concern — The physician concludes that the patient's condition requires psychological help.
Location: Bedroom
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Murder Suspicion — The delusional patient suspects his wife and physician of plotting his murder through overdoses.
Location: Bedroom
The Fatal Accusation
The husband writes an incriminating letter and gives it to his wife to mail unknowingly. He then threatens her with a gun before collapsing and dying.
Key Events
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Accusatory Letter — He writes the district attorney accusing the pair of conspiring to murder him.
Location: Bedroom
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Letter Mailed — The wife gives the letter to the postman, believing it concerns insurance correspondence.
Location: Suburban house
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Gunpoint Threat — The husband reveals the accusation, points a gun, and claims self-defense has been arranged.
Location: Bedroom
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Sudden Death — Before firing, the husband collapses onto the bed and dies.
Location: Bedroom
Witnesses Everywhere
The wife attempts to conceal the death while retrieving the letter. The aunt, accidental gunshot, neighbor boy, notary, and near collision multiply the possible evidence against her.
Key Events
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Postman Refuses Return — The postman says the letter can be returned only if the sender requests it.
Location: Neighborhood
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Aunt Arrives — The husband's overbearing aunt enters the house using a hidden key.
Location: Suburban house
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Aunt Turned Away — The wife prevents the aunt from entering the bedroom and persuades her to leave.
Location: Suburban house
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Accidental Gunshot — While moving the gun, the wife accidentally fires it into the floor through an open window. Characters: Hoppy / Billy
Location: Bedroom
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Boy Hears Shot — The neighbor boy hears the gunshot, becoming a possible witness. Characters: Hoppy / Billy
Location: Neighboring property
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Notary Denied Entry — A notary arrives for an appointment, but the wife denies him access to the bedroom.
Location: Suburban house
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Near Collision — As the wife reverses her car, she narrowly avoids hitting the neighbor boy. Characters: Hoppy / Billy
Location: Driveway
The Letter Returns
The post office supervisor refuses to halt delivery, leaving the wife apparently trapped. The postman ultimately returns the letter for insufficient postage, allowing it to be destroyed.
Key Events
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Witnesses Reconsidered — The wife fears testimony from the postman, aunt, boy, neighbor, notary, and druggist.
Location: Road to the post office
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Supervisor Refuses Help — The supervisor demands the sender's signature, then refuses to stop delivery after the wife declines to show the letter.
Location: Post office
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Defeated Return Home — The wife returns home defeated and tells the physician that the husband is dead.
Location: Suburban house
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Postage Saves Her — The postman returns the letter because it has insufficient postage.
Location: Suburban house
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Letter Destroyed — The physician tears the letter, and the pieces are burned.
Location: Suburban house
A bedridden and gravely ill man believes his wife and doctor are conspiring to kill him, and outlines his suspicions in a letter.