Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Marriage Under Shifting Time
Nick notices inconsistencies in his life and suspects Tommy is changing the past to reclaim Janine. His suspicion strains his marriage, while he begins storing memories and hears Zoe's account of a loss.
Key Events
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Time Jaunting Reshapes Daily Life — Time travel is available to the very rich, and shifts routinely alter people's lives.
Location: Near-future society
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Nick Notices Another Shift — After a third shift in a year, Nick feels that something in his life is wrong. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Janine Mikkelsen
Location: Nick and Janine's home
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Nick Suspects Tommy — Nick suspects Tommy is altering the past to reclaim Janine. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Janine Mikkelsen, Tommy Hambleton
Location: Unspecified
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Nick Visits Tommy — Nick visits his former college friend under the pretense of catching up. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Tommy Hambleton
Location: Tommy's location
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Tommy Regrets His Marriage — Tommy does not disclose whether he altered the past but says he wishes his marriage had gone differently. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Tommy Hambleton
Location: Tommy's location
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Nick Stores His Memories — Nick stores memories in preparation for future time shifts. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen
Location: Memory storage company
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Zoe Reports a Loss — Zoe tells Nick that her partner died in a rock-climbing accident. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Zoe Mikkelsen
Location: Unspecified
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Nick Learns Janine Visited Tommy — Nick discovers that Janine also went to see Tommy, deepening the couple's conflict. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Janine Mikkelsen
Location: Nick and Janine's home
The History Rewritten
Nick and Janine make plans to leave together, but a major time shift separates them. Nick discovers that Janine's history has changed and finds himself married to Alex.
Key Events
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Nick Learns Janine Visited Tommy — Nick discovers that Janine also went to see Tommy, deepening the couple's conflict. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Janine Mikkelsen
Location: Nick and Janine's home
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Nick Proposes Leaving Together — After several days of anger, Nick asks Janine to travel with him until there are no places left. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Janine Mikkelsen
Location: Unspecified
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A Huge Shift Separates Them — As they are leaving together, a huge time shift sweeps over them. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Janine Mikkelsen
Location: Unspecified
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Nick Cannot Find Janine — Nick finds himself alone in a car and cannot find Janine in his contacts or under her maiden name. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen
Location: Car
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Janine Describes the New History — Janine says they were married, had a cat, and that she has been with Tommy for nine years. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Janine Mikkelsen
Location: Phone call
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Nick Finds Himself Married to Alex — Nick's car takes him home, where he discovers that Alex is now his wife. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Alex Leslie
Location: Nick's home
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Alex Senses Nick Has Changed — Alex senses that Nick is different, while he gradually seems to remember their life together. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Alex Leslie
Location: Nick and Alex's home
A Choice Across Thirteen Years
Zoe's account of changing the past helps Nick recognize what time jaunting can alter. He travels thirteen years back, redirects Tommy toward Alex, and leaves a note for his past self.
Key Events
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Alex Senses Nick Has Changed — Alex senses that Nick is different, while he gradually seems to remember their life together. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Alex Leslie
Location: Nick and Alex's home
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Zoe Reveals Her Intervention — Zoe explains that she paid to change the past so her partner would not go rock climbing that day. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Zoe Mikkelsen
Location: Unspecified
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Nick Chooses to Change the Past — Nick decides to time-jaunt thirteen years into the past to try to make things right. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen
Location: Unspecified
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Nick Redirects Tommy Toward Alex — Nick tells Tommy he is leaving Alex and persuades Tommy to pursue her. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Tommy Hambleton, Alex Leslie
Location: Thirteen years in the past
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Nick Leaves Himself a Note — Nick leaves his past self a note predicting Alex will fall for Tommy and reassuring him about future love. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen
Location: Thirteen years in the past
The Recognition at the Party
Nick returns to a present in which he lives alone and has withdrawn from others. Tommy persuades him to attend a party, where he and Janine meet again and Nick stops himself from leaving.
Key Events
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Nick Returns to an Empty Life — Nick returns to the present alone and apparently withdrawn. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen
Location: Nick's home
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Tommy Brings Nick to the Party — Zoe contacts Tommy, who persuades Nick to attend a party where people say they have missed him. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Tommy Hambleton, Zoe Mikkelsen
Location: Party
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Nick and Janine Recognize Each Other — Nick sees Janine working as the party photographer; they meet eyes, and Nick stops himself from leaving. Characters: Nick Mikkelsen, Janine Mikkelsen
Location: Party