Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Marriage Tested by Infertility
Bob and Amy's marriage is tested by their struggle to have a child. A doctor gives them little hope for another IVF attempt, leaving Amy determined and Bob uncertain about adoption.
Key Events
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Bob and Amy Recall Their Journey — Bob and Amy look back on the events that brought them to a difficult crossroads. Characters: Bob, Amy
Location: Unspecified
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Love and Marriage — Bob and Amy fall in love and marry. Characters: Bob, Amy
Location: Unspecified
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The Struggle to Conceive — The couple struggle to have a child. Characters: Bob, Amy
Location: Unspecified
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Low Odds for Another IVF Round — Their doctor says another IVF round offers only a small chance of pregnancy. Characters: Bob, Amy
Location: Doctor's office
Care Amid Personal Grief
Their pain affects Bob's work, while the couple also take action to rescue ducks trapped by freezing water. Shirlee's pregnancy and uncertainty with Gerard introduce a parallel question about family and choice.
Key Events
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Different Responses to Adoption — Amy refuses to give up, while Bob needs time to consider adoption. Characters: Bob, Amy
Location: Unspecified
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Anger Enters Bob's Work — Bob's editor criticizes a review that dwells on personal anger. Characters: Bob
Location: Bob's workplace
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Rescuing Ducks at Night — Bob and Amy drive out at night to rescue ducks trapped by freezing water. Characters: Bob, Amy
Location: Freezing water
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Shirlee Faces an Uncertain Future — Pregnant Shirlee is unsure what she wants from her relationship with Gerard. Characters: Shirlee, Gerard
Location: Unspecified
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Gerard Offers Support — Gerard offers to marry Shirlee or support whatever she chooses. Characters: Shirlee, Gerard
Location: Unspecified
A Possible New Family
Gerard offers Shirlee support, and Bob's enthusiasm for music prompts Gerard to consider a different future. Bob and Amy begin to imagine that family can be formed through care rather than biology, and they hope to raise Shirlee's baby.
Key Events
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A Dinner for Difficult News — Shirlee and Gerard plan to tell Gerard's father during a dinner hosted by Bob and Amy. Characters: Bob, Amy, Shirlee, Gerard
Location: Bob and Amy's home
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Music Opens Another Path — Bob's enthusiasm for music inspires Gerard to consider a different future. Characters: Bob, Gerard
Location: Unspecified
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Family Beyond Biology — Bob comes to see family as defined by meaning rather than blood or genes. Characters: Bob, Amy
Location: Unspecified
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Hope to Raise the Baby — Bob and Amy embrace the possibility of raising Shirlee's baby, and Shirlee welcomes the idea. Characters: Bob, Amy, Shirlee
Location: Unspecified
Shirlee's Choice and Its Aftermath
Shirlee writes that she has met Jerry, who is ready to accept the baby, and asks Gerard to be happy for her. She and Jerry marry, their baby is named Austin, and Bob and Amy's hopes remain unresolved.
Key Events
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Shirlee Chooses Jerry — Shirlee tells Gerard she loves him but has met Jerry and believes marrying him is right. Characters: Shirlee, Gerard, Jerry
Location: Unspecified
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Shirlee and Jerry Marry — Shirlee and Jerry marry, with Jerry prepared to accept the baby. Characters: Shirlee, Jerry
Location: Unspecified
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Austin Is Born — Their baby is born and named Austin after Jerry's father. Characters: Shirlee, Jerry, Baby
Location: Unspecified
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An Unexpected Family — The ending leaves Bob and Amy's longing unresolved as others shape a family in unexpected ways. Characters: Bob, Amy, Shirlee, Jerry, Baby
Location: Unspecified