Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The One-Week Gamble
Gordon accepts a demanding asbestos-removal contract and brings his crew into Danvers State Hospital. An unexplained voice immediately unsettles him.
Key Events
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Gordon Wins Hospital Contract — Gordon promises to finish the hospital asbestos job in one week. Characters: Gordon
Location: Massachusetts
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Crew Arrives at Danvers — Gordon brings his crew into the abandoned hospital for the contracted work. Characters: Gordon, Phil, Mike, Hank, Jeff
Location: Danvers State Hospital
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Voice Calls Gordon — While surveying the site, Gordon hears a disembodied voice greet him by name. Characters: Gordon
Location: Danvers State Hospital
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Work Begins — The crew starts removing asbestos under Gordon's compressed schedule. Characters: Gordon, Phil, Mike, Hank, Jeff
Location: Hospital work areas
Tapes Beneath The Dust
Mike discovers nine therapy tapes and begins listening to the Doctor's questioning. Hank's discovery of valuables draws him back into the hospital after dark.
Key Events
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Mike Finds Nine Tapes — Mike discovers a box containing nine recorded therapy sessions. Characters: Mike
Location: Danvers State Hospital
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The Doctor Questions a Patient — Mike hears the Doctor investigate a patient's past crime through recorded sessions. Characters: Mike, Doctor
Location: Hospital tape-listening area
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Hank Finds Silver Coins — Hank discovers antique coins and other valuables hidden in the crematory. Characters: Hank
Location: Hospital crematory
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Hank Returns After Dark — Hank returns for the valuables and becomes frightened by noises and a shadowy figure. Characters: Hank
Location: Hospital crematory
The Missing Worker
Hank disappears after a frightening night, and Craig replaces him. Gordon reveals the domestic violence that has separated him from Wendy and their infant daughter.
Key Events
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Hank Fails To Appear — Hank misses work, so Craig is hired and the crew begins reacting to his absence. Characters: Gordon, Phil, Mike, Jeff, Craig McManus
Location: Danvers State Hospital
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Gordon Confesses Domestic Violence — Gordon tells Phil that he slapped Wendy and lost access to his family. Characters: Gordon, Phil, Wendy
Location: Hospital work area
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Jeff Sees Hank — Jeff sees Hank staring through a window in sunglasses and talking to himself. Characters: Jeff, Hank
Location: Hospital stairwell
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Crew Searches For Hank — The men split up to search the hospital while Mike remains drawn to the tapes. Characters: Gordon, Phil, Mike, Jeff, Craig McManus
Location: Danvers State Hospital
Darkness And Disclosure
Phil and Jeff find Hank in the tunnels while the generator fails. Mike restores the electricity and hears the final tape's revelation about the murderous personality.
Key Events
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Hank Found In Tunnels — Phil finds Hank half-nude and muttering beneath the hospital. Characters: Phil, Jeff, Hank
Location: Hospital tunnels
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Generator Runs Dry — The generator runs out of fuel, trapping Jeff in darkness until Mike restores power. Characters: Jeff, Phil, Mike
Location: Hospital tunnels
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Final Tape Reveals the Killer — The ninth tape identifies the patient's malignant personality as responsible for the family murders. Characters: Mike, Doctor
Location: Hospital tape-listening area
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Gordon Displays Baptism Photos — Phil finds Gordon staring at his daughter's baptism photographs pasted onto the wall. Characters: Gordon, Phil
Location: Former patient room
The Weak And Wounded
Jeff is attacked, Hank is found mutilated, and Gordon turns violently on Craig. Gordon then recalls murdering the crew and his family before attempting to call home.
Key Events
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Jeff Is Attacked At Van — Jeff emerges from the tunnels and is attacked by an unseen assailant. Characters: Jeff
Location: Company van
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Hank Found Wrapped — Gordon finds Hank wrapped in plastic with the lobotomy pick protruding from his eye. Characters: Gordon, Hank
Location: Hospital room
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Gordon Attacks Craig — Gordon attacks Craig and stabs him in the eye with the lobotomy pick. Characters: Gordon, Hank, Craig McManus
Location: Hospital room
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Gordon Recalls The Murders — Gordon finds the crew's bodies and recounts murdering them, Wendy, his daughter, and their dog. Characters: Gordon, Phil, Mike, Hank, Jeff, Craig McManus, Wendy
Location: Various hospital rooms
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Gordon Calls Home — Distraught and confused, Gordon tries to call home and apologize to Wendy. Characters: Gordon, Wendy
Location: Danvers State Hospital
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Weak And Wounded — The tape asks where the malignant personality lives, answering that it lives in the weak and wounded. Characters: Gordon, Doctor
Location: Danvers State Hospital