Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Dangerous Invention
Pat objects to the lethal risks of the Augmentor, but Crow overrides him and demands continued testing. The machine's danger becomes the central threat.
Key Events
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Fatal Trial Begins — The company begins a live human trial of the Augmentor 1000. Characters: Pat Utley, Edward Crow
Location: Research facility
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Subject Goes Berserk — The test subject becomes violent after activation. Characters: Pat Utley, Edward Crow
Location: Research facility
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Pat Pulls The Plug — Pat stops the machine before the dangerous trial continues. Characters: Pat Utley, Edward Crow
Location: Research facility
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Crow Overrides Pat — Crow rejects Pat's safety objections and demands further development. Characters: Pat Utley, Edward Crow
Location: Company facility
The Club Takes Shape
Bullied teenagers form a club and investigate the company through computer systems. Their discoveries connect Pat's forced demonstration to a potentially fatal experiment.
Key Events
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Friends Form A Club — Three bullied teenagers decide to create a defensive club.
Location: Drew's house
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Computer Systems Hacked — Teenagers hack the company's computers while visiting Pat's workplace. Characters: Pat Utley
Location: Pat's workplace
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Forced Demonstration Revealed — Drew overhears Crow ordering Pat to perform a dangerous demonstration. Characters: Pat Utley, Edward Crow
Location: Pat's workplace
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Classified Files Searched — Miles searches classified files to learn more about the machine.
Location: Company computer system
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Password Scheme — The group recruits a school hustler and obtains a superuser password.
Location: Company facility
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Deadly Schematics Found — The files reveal that the machine can destroy a user's nervous system.
Location: Company computer system
The Night Raid
The team obtains access credentials, downloads the schematics, and decides to steal the Augmentor. Their nighttime raid succeeds despite alarms and a crashing computer system.
Key Events
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A Machine Is Stolen — The group decides to steal the machine to save Pat. Characters: Pat Utley
Location: Company building
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Night Raid Begins — The team infiltrates the building and plants surveillance equipment.
Location: Company building
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System Virus Escape — A silent alarm triggers guards, but the group crashes the system and escapes.
Location: Company building
Crow's Desperate Deal
The team learns that Crow has backups and a prototype connected to secret black-market plans. Failed attempts to obtain the prototype increase the pressure before the buyer demonstration.
Key Events
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Backup Prototype Discovered — Surveillance reveals that Crow has backups and another prototype. Characters: Edward Crow
Location: Master control
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Prototype Meets Fail — Two attempts to obtain the prototype fail. Characters: Edward Crow
Location: Public meeting locations
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Crow Plans Black Market — Crow prepares a buyer demonstration tied to secret black-market plans. Characters: Edward Crow
Location: Company facility
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Crow Humiliated Remotely — A remote suit makes Crow perform ridiculous movements during testing. Characters: Edward Crow
Location: Demonstration site
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Elimination Threat Overheard — Crow is overheard discussing the elimination of the P.U.N.K.S. Characters: Edward Crow
Location: Company facility
Rescue At The Demonstration
Crow threatens the team and forcibly prepares Pat for the presentation. The rescue becomes a fight, ending when the motion-control suit turns Crow's violence against him.
Key Events
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Pat Is Drugged — Pat attempts to resign but is drugged and forcibly prepared for the demonstration. Characters: Pat Utley, Edward Crow
Location: Company facility
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Buyer Demonstration Attack — The final demonstration becomes a rescue operation involving Pat and the machine. Characters: Pat Utley, Edward Crow
Location: Buyer presentation
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Crow Fights Drew — Crow wears the Augmentor and fights Drew during the rescue. Characters: Edward Crow
Location: Buyer presentation
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Remote Suit Turns Crow — Crow is made to beat himself up through the motion-control suit. Characters: Edward Crow
Location: Buyer presentation
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Police Arrest Criminals — Police arrive and arrest the criminals after the rescue. Characters: Pat Utley, Edward Crow
Location: Buyer presentation
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Augmentor Defends Miles — The club unites against the jocks, and the Augmentor helps drive them away.
Location: School courtyard
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Operation Receives Credit — A newspaper credits the P.U.N.K.S. with exposing Crow's operation.
Location: On the way home
Drew Utley, Miles Kitchen, Lanny Nygren and Jonny P. comprise a club called 'P.U.N.K.S.'. Their mission is to protect and serve peace.