Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Mother Turns Away
Michelle searches for Justine while Stephen traces evidence of a planned murder-suicide. When Michelle transforms into a ghost, Stephen takes Justine away.
Key Events
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Ghost Pandemic Spreads — A pandemic of suicides and mysterious deaths spreads through ghosts connected to technology.
Location: The United States
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Michelle Searches for Justine — Michelle searches for her daughter during the technology-linked ghost crisis. Characters: Michelle, Justine
Location: Roads near Michelle's apartment
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Stephen Traces Michelle — Stephen discovers evidence that Michelle planned to kill Justine and herself. Characters: Stephen, Michelle
Location: Michelle's apartment
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Justine Returns — Michelle sees Justine returning and rushes downstairs before Stephen takes her away. Characters: Michelle, Justine, Stephen
Location: Road outside Michelle's apartment
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Michelle Becomes a Ghost — Michelle transforms into a ghost and angrily watches Stephen drive away with Justine. Characters: Michelle, Stephen, Justine
Location: Outside the apartment
Cabin Without Signals
At the cabin, Justine describes Michelle's apparent death. Marta's arrival introduces domestic tension before an unplugged laptop begins receiving messages from Michelle.
Key Events
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Michelle Becomes a Ghost — Michelle transforms into a ghost and angrily watches Stephen drive away with Justine. Characters: Michelle, Stephen, Justine
Location: Outside the apartment
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Cabin Interrogation — Stephen asks Justine what happened during her encounter with Michelle. Characters: Stephen, Justine
Location: Stephen's cabin
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Michelle Dissolves — Justine explains that Michelle died and dissolved into ash while trying to kill her. Characters: Michelle, Justine
Location: Michelle's apartment
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Marta Reaches the Cabin — Marta arrives, complains about confinement, and worries Stephen may not keep her around. Characters: Stephen, Marta, Justine
Location: Stephen's cabin
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Marta Tries Seduction — Marta tries to prove her usefulness by seducing Stephen. Characters: Stephen, Marta
Location: Stephen's cabin
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The Laptop Activates — An unplugged laptop turns on, alarming Marta because technology is forbidden. Characters: Stephen, Marta
Location: Stephen's cabin
The Ghost Comes Calling
Stephen replies to Michelle through the damaged laptop, bringing her ghost to the cabin. Michelle kills Marta, forcing Stephen and Justine back onto the road.
Key Events
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Messages From Michelle — Continuous instant messages from Michelle appear, and Marta shoves the laptop into a wall. Characters: Stephen, Michelle, Marta
Location: Stephen's cabin
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Justine Confirms the Death — Stephen speaks with Justine, who insists that her mother is dead. Characters: Stephen, Justine
Location: Stephen's cabin
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Michelle Enters the Cabin — Stephen replies through the damaged laptop, causing Michelle to appear at the cabin. Characters: Stephen, Michelle, Marta, Justine
Location: Stephen's cabin
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Marta Is Killed — Michelle kills Marta while Stephen and Justine escape. Characters: Michelle, Marta, Stephen, Justine
Location: Stephen's cabin
Road Through the Dead Zone
An armed stranger demands a processor, then gives Stephen red tape for protection. Stephen seals the car, but Justine vanishes during the night.
Key Events
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Forced Processor Mission — An armed stranger forces Stephen to find a processor intended to help solve the crisis. Characters: Stephen, Justine
Location: Road to a computer supply store
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Red Tape Protection — Stephen receives red tape and covers the car to block wireless signals. Characters: Stephen, Justine
Location: A deserted road
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Justine Disappears — Stephen wakes to find the passenger door open and Justine missing. Characters: Stephen, Justine
Location: Inside the taped car
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Stephen Recovers Justine — Stephen gets Justine back before she touches Michelle's ghost and races to the car. Characters: Stephen, Justine, Michelle
Location: Road beside the car
The Last Ride Out
Stephen recovers Justine and spots a bus traveling toward a wireless-free refugee camp. He sacrifices himself to Michelle, but Marta's ghost claims his soul while Justine escapes.
Key Events
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Refugee Bus Appears — Stephen sees a bus bound for a refugee camp beyond wireless computer signals. Characters: Stephen, Justine
Location: A deserted road
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Stephen Sacrifices Himself — Stephen sends Justine toward the bus and offers himself to Michelle instead. Characters: Stephen, Justine, Michelle
Location: Road beside the refugee bus
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Michelle Withdraws — Michelle kisses Stephen, backs away, and disappears with a smile. Characters: Stephen, Michelle
Location: Road beside the refugee bus
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Marta Takes Stephen's Soul — Marta's ghost clings to Stephen and takes his soul after Michelle leaves. Characters: Stephen, Marta, Michelle
Location: Road beside the refugee bus
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Justine Reaches Safety — Justine remains safe inside the bus with other refugees and escapees. Characters: Justine
Location: Refugee bus
The world has been reshaped by the invasion of ghosts via the wireless internet. Cities are deserted, technology has been destroyed and the few remaining human beings eschew anything electrical in order to avoid a confrontation with the soulless ghosts that now wander the planet. Most of the ghosts are doomed to a repetitive loop of something they did while they were still despairing humans (a man repeatedly hangs himself, for example), but there are some ghosts so locked in denial, they do not know they are dead. They continue to haunt their homes, wrapped in fear that their souls will soon be torn from them.