Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Accusation and Confinement
Zoe faces an accusation and fears a lengthy prison sentence. Bell arranges home monitoring, which confines Zoe to her apartment under strict electronic limits.
Key Events
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Zoe Faces a Murder Accusation — Zoe is accused of killing someone and fears a prison sentence. Characters: Zoe
Location: San Francisco
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Bell Secures Home Monitoring — Bell arranges home monitoring instead of a possible life sentence. Characters: Zoe, Bell
Location: Legal proceedings
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The Ankle Device Is Fitted — Zoe is warned that leaving the radius or tampering with the device triggers an alert. Characters: Zoe
Location: Zoe's apartment
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A Fifty-Seven-Foot Boundary — The monitoring system confines Zoe to a radius of 57 feet from the modem. Characters: Zoe
Location: Zoe's apartment
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Cut Off from Her Computer — Zoe cannot keep her computer and must adapt to life under confinement. Characters: Zoe
Location: Zoe's apartment
Isolation and Investigation
Without her computer, Zoe relies on radio, music, and deliveries to occupy herself. She begins testing the limits of her confinement while seeking records connected to her case.
Key Events
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Cut Off from Her Computer — Zoe cannot keep her computer and must adapt to life under confinement. Characters: Zoe
Location: Zoe's apartment
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Radio and Deliveries Fill the Days — Zoe uses radio, music, and grocery deliveries to stay occupied and connected. Characters: Zoe
Location: Zoe's apartment
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Zoe Tests Her Confinement — Isolation leads Zoe to begin testing the limits of her confinement. Characters: Zoe
Location: Zoe's apartment
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Records Become a Lead — Zoe seeks records and a reverse directory to pursue answers about her case. Characters: Zoe
Location: Zoe's apartment
A Desperate Search
Zoe presses Brynn for dated phone records and asks Daly for a reverse directory. She admits that she fears nobody else will believe her as she follows information from a call.
Key Events
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Zoe Presses Brynn for Records — Zoe asks Brynn for records from June 6, 2001, and threatens her to keep the visit secret. Characters: Zoe, Brynn
Location: Brynn's location
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Zoe Calls Daly — Zoe asks Daly for a reverse directory and says she has only a few hours. Characters: Zoe, Daly
Location: Phone call
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Fear of Being Disbelieved — Zoe admits she fears nobody else will believe her. Characters: Zoe
Location: Phone call
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A Call Points Toward the Bay — Using information from a call, Zoe reasons that the person she seeks may be near the Bay. Characters: Zoe
Location: Zoe's apartment
The Caller Turns the Tables
Zoe challenges the person she is trying to reach, but he reveals that he called her phone rather than his own. Zoe is soon outside, asking strangers for bus fare.
Key Events
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Zoe Challenges the Caller — Zoe challenges the person to visit and says she will see him in jail instead. Characters: Zoe
Location: Phone call
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The Caller Reveals His Trick — The caller reveals that he called Zoe's phone rather than his own. Characters: Zoe
Location: Phone call
Uncertain Aftermath
A car strikes Zoe in the street. A witness says she appeared suddenly, and a police officer warns her not to move because of a possible spinal injury; the excerpt leaves her fate unresolved.
Key Events
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Zoe Begs for Bus Fare — Outside, Zoe asks strangers for money to pay for a bus fare. Characters: Zoe
Location: Street
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A Car Strikes Zoe — A car hits Zoe as a witness says she appeared suddenly and the driver tried to stop. Characters: Zoe
Location: Street
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The Officer Warns Her Not to Move — A police officer warns Zoe not to move because of a possible spinal injury; her fate is uncertain. Characters: Zoe
Location: Street