Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Abandoned Car
Ginny, a straight-laced fifteen-year-old, is with her friend Sally in an abandoned car on the outskirts of town. The isolated setting frames the encounter.
Key Events
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Town Outskirts — The story takes place on the outskirts of town. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: Outskirts of town
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Abandoned Car — Ginny and Sally are present in an abandoned car. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
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Ginny Watches Sally — Fifteen-year-old Ginny watches her friend Sally. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
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Self-Harm Revealed — Ginny sees Sally burning herself with a cigarette. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
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Sally Burns Her Skin — Sally continues the cigarette-burning act witnessed by Ginny. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
A Harmful Revelation
Ginny watches Sally burn herself with a cigarette. She reacts by trying to help Sally rather than simply ignoring what she has witnessed.
Key Events
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Ginny Reacts — Ginny responds after seeing Sally harm herself. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
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Rescue Attempt — Ginny attempts to save Sally from a downward spiral. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
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Sally Remains Lost — Sally's condition shows that she is already deeply lost. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
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The Situation Goes Awry — Ginny's effort to help Sally does not proceed as intended. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
The Abyss Revealed
Ginny discovers that Sally is already deeply lost in a destructive downward spiral. Her rescue attempt goes awry as the seriousness of Sally's condition becomes clear.
Key Events
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Depth Of The Abyss — Ginny recognizes how far Sally has fallen into the abyss. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
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Rescue Becomes Impossible — Sally's condition makes Ginny's attempt to save her unsuccessful. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
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Threat Of Being Caught — Ginny realizes she may be caught for the same situation. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
Escape Before Capture
Ginny realizes that remaining involved could lead to her being caught for the same situation. She must get out after recognizing that she cannot save Sally.
Key Events
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Ginny Reassesses Her Choice — Ginny must choose between remaining involved and protecting herself. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
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Ginny Moves To Escape — Ginny acts on the need to get out before being caught. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: Outskirts of town
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Sally Remains Behind — Sally remains associated with the destructive situation Ginny is leaving. Characters: Ginny, Sally
Location: An abandoned car
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Ginny Gets Out — Ginny gets out before she is caught for the same situation. Characters: Ginny
Location: Outskirts of town
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Aftermath Of Witnessing — Ginny leaves after confronting the limits of her attempt to help Sally. Characters: Ginny
Location: Outskirts of town
In an abandoned car on the outskirts of town, fearless high schooler Sally leads straight-laced teenager Ginny to spend a night in the rusted vehicle. Ginny wants to relight their old friendship, but Sally has other plans. As her friend’s behavior becomes more and more erratic, Ginny is forced to face a terrifying demon…