Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Isolation And New Attention
Jamie is ridiculed by nearly everyone around him and relies on a stuffed bear for companionship. Sandy’s arrival gives his isolation a new emotional focus.
Key Events
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Jamie Faces Constant Ridicule — Jamie is mocked by classmates, other children, and older women. Characters: Jamie Benjamin
Location: Toronto
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The Stuffed Bear Companion — Jamie regularly talks with his stuffed bear, whose voice is heard by the audience. Characters: Jamie Benjamin
Location: Jamie’s home
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Parents Leave Town — Jamie’s parents leave for a business trip and arrange temporary childcare. Characters: Jamie Benjamin
Location: Jamie’s home
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Sandy Starts Babysitting — Sandy O'Reilly arrives to babysit Jamie while his parents are away. Characters: Jamie Benjamin, Sandy O'Reilly
Location: Jamie’s home
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Jamie Watches Sandy — Jamie drops a napkin and uses the moment to look at Sandy’s underwear. Characters: Jamie Benjamin, Sandy O'Reilly
Location: Dining room
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A Secret Is Requested — Jamie asks Sandy whether she can keep a secret. Characters: Jamie Benjamin, Sandy O'Reilly
Location: Jamie’s home
The Secret Beneath The Woods
Jamie reveals the hidden pit and explains that he feeds its creatures raw meat. His attraction to Sandy and his secret behavior begin to merge.
Key Events
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The Hidden Pit Revealed — Jamie tells Sandy that he found a pit filled with mysterious creatures. Characters: Jamie Benjamin, Sandy O'Reilly
Location: Forest
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Raw Meat Feeds Creatures — Jamie cares for the creatures by feeding them raw meat. Characters: Jamie Benjamin
Location: Forest pit
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Money Is Stolen — Jamie steals money from Sandy’s purse to buy meat for the creatures. Characters: Jamie Benjamin, Sandy O'Reilly
Location: Jamie’s home
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The Bear Suggests Feeding Victims — The stuffed bear suggests feeding the creatures to people who tormented Jamie. Characters: Jamie Benjamin
Location: Jamie’s home
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Tormentors Enter The Pit — Jamie follows the suggestion and feeds people who tormented him to the creatures. Characters: Jamie Benjamin
Location: Forest pit
A Hunger For Revenge
Jamie steals money for meat and follows the suggestion to feed his tormentors to the creatures. When those targets are exhausted, Sandy becomes dangerously involved.
Key Events
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Jamie Runs Out Of Victims — After running out of people, Jamie turns his attention toward Sandy. Characters: Jamie Benjamin
Location: Forest
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Sandy Is Taken To The Woods — Jamie takes Sandy into the forest and leads her toward the pit. Characters: Jamie Benjamin, Sandy O'Reilly
Location: Forest
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Sandy Falls Into The Pit — Sandy accidentally falls into the pit while Jamie is present. Characters: Jamie Benjamin, Sandy O'Reilly
Location: Forest pit
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Sandy Is Eaten — The creatures eat Sandy after she falls into the pit. Characters: Jamie Benjamin, Sandy O'Reilly
Location: Forest pit
Escape Into Chaos
Sandy is eaten after falling into the pit, and Jamie releases the creatures in grief and anger. Their rampage spreads beyond the forest into the countryside.
Key Events
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Jamie Lowers A Rope — Heartbroken and angry, Jamie lowers a rope into the pit. Characters: Jamie Benjamin
Location: Forest pit
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The Creatures Escape — The creatures use the opportunity to escape from the pit. Characters: Jamie Benjamin
Location: Forest pit
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Creatures Rampage Countryside — The escaped creatures rampage through the surrounding countryside.
Location: Countryside
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The Creatures Are Chased Back — The creatures are tracked down and driven back toward their pit.
Location: Countryside
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The Creatures Are Shot — A local militia shoots the creatures and buries them in the pit.
Location: Forest pit
The Pit Repeats
The creatures are killed and the deaths are disguised as attacks by wild dogs. Jamie moves to his grandparents’ home, only to be lured into another pit.
Key Events
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Deaths Blamed On Wild Dogs — To avoid panic, the killings are publicly blamed on wild dogs.
Location: Countryside
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Jamie Moves To Grandparents — After the creature killings, Jamie goes to live with his grandparents. Characters: Jamie Benjamin
Location: Grandparents’ home
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A New Friendship Is Offered — Jamie meets a girl who says she will be his friend. Characters: Jamie Benjamin
Location: Grandparents’ area
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The Second Pit Trap — The girl tricks Jamie into following her into the woods and pushes him into her own pit. Characters: Jamie Benjamin
Location: Woods