Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Commando Selection
Allied officers are interviewed for a high-risk mission behind enemy lines. Major Brand is appointed commander despite his lack of combat experience, while tensions surface regarding his wife's past.
Key Events
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Selection Interview — Allied officers are interviewed for a dangerous commando mission. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Egypt
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Command Decision — Brand is appointed commander despite lacking combat experience. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Egypt
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Parachute Insertion — The unit drops behind enemy lines to attack German headquarters. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Benghazi
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Wife Invitation — Brand invites Leith to drinks with his wife, setting up tension. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Egypt
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Affair Revelation — Brand learns of his wife's past romantic involvement with Leith. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Egypt
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Civilian Disguise — The unit adopts civilian attire to infiltrate enemy territory. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Benghazi
Behind Enemy Lines
The patrol infiltrates Benghazi, secures secret documents, and ambushes a German detachment. Brand's hidden fear and the unit's reliance on his leadership are tested under fire.
Key Events
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Sentry Ambush — Brand freezes during a sentry kill, revealing his combat fear. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Benghazi Streets
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Safe Breach — The patrol secures secret documents with minimal casualties. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: German HQ
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Desert Ambush — The patrol ambushes a German detachment and captures Oberst Lutze. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Desert Outskirts
The Desert Crucible
Stranded without transport, the group endures a brutal trek across the Western Desert. Brand's animosity peaks as he deliberately withholds aid, allowing a man to die during a sandstorm.
Key Events
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Left Behind — Brand abandons Leith with two wounded men to eliminate a witness. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Desert
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Mercy Kill Attempt — Leith attempts to end the wounded soldier's suffering but runs out of ammo. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Desert
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Camel Theft Discovery — The patrol finds their transport murdered and camels stolen. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Desert Camp
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Desert March — The group endures a grueling trek back across the harsh terrain. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Western Desert
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Scorpion Sting — A scorpion climbs Brand's trousers and delivers a painful sting. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Desert Rest Site
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Sandstorm Death — Brand withholds aid during a sandstorm, allowing the stung man to die. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Desert
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Arab Friend Join — Leith's local contact reunites with the patrol after the mercy kill sequence. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Desert
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Growing Animosity — Brand's resentment toward Leith intensifies during the arduous march. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Desert
The Bitter Aftermath
The survivors return to headquarters and receive official recognition. Brand's hollow victory is underscored by his wife's rejection and his final act of pinning the medal on a training dummy.
Key Events
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Sandstorm Death — Brand withholds aid during a sandstorm, allowing the stung man to die. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Desert
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HQ Return — A rescue patrol retrieves the survivors and returns them to base. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: Allied HQ
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Award Ceremony — Brand receives the Distinguished Service Order for mission success. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: HQ Headquarters
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Wife Distress — Jane learns of the death and walks away disconsolate instead of congratulating him. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: HQ Quarters
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Dummy Pinning — Brand ruefully pins the medal on a stuffed dummy, acknowledging his hollow victory. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: HQ Office
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Bitter Reflection — The story closes on Brand's quiet realization of his moral failure. Characters: Major David Brand
Location: HQ Office
During the second world war, two British officers, Brand and Leith, who have never seen combat, are assigned a vital mission. Their relationship and the operation are complicated by the arrival of Brand's wife, who had a tryst with Leith years earlier.