Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Small Authority, Close to Home
Roger questions a construction detail but is ordered back to work, suggesting that his judgment carries little authority. At home, Cynthia discusses adolescence, while the teenagers' teasing exposes their awkward social tensions.
Key Events
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False Start Disqualification — A competitor is disqualified after a false start.
Location: Swimming meet
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Roger Handles Work Demands — Roger is shown dealing with people around him and the demands of his work. Characters: Roger Lent
Location: Unspecified
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Stud Spacing Dispute — Roger questions the spacing of wall studs on a construction job. Characters: Roger Lent
Location: Construction job
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Roger Is Told to Stop Thinking — Roger's superior tells him to stop thinking and return to work. Characters: Roger Lent
Location: Construction job
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Cynthia Discusses Growing Up — Cynthia helps a young swimmer use a tampon and discusses growing up, relationships, and sex. Characters: Cynthia
Location: Home
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Teenagers Tease Josh — Friends tease Josh about asking someone out, revealing awkward tensions among the teenagers.
Location: Unspecified
Copper Canyon's Promise
Roger and Georgie encounter a development presented as a lucrative opportunity. Doug's claims draw Roger in, even as doubts about the project's promises begin to surface.
Key Events
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Lents Enter Copper Canyon — Roger and Georgie appear financially comfortable as they encounter the development opportunity. Characters: Roger Lent, Georgie Lent
Location: Copper Canyon
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Doug Pitches the Development — Doug promotes the project with claims of state approval and impressive projected returns. Characters: Roger Lent, Doug
Location: Copper Canyon
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Roger Considers the Deal — Roger is drawn into the investment while questions about its promises and backers emerge. Characters: Roger Lent
Location: Copper Canyon
Warning Signs Beneath the Surface
A country-club conversation reveals the tennis pro's involvement with cocaine, and Roger hears that Georgie may be slipping away. Ernie's pressure over a debt and his account of bank and inspector arrangements deepen the sense of corruption.
Key Events
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Cocaine at the Country Club — A conversation reveals that the tennis pro is involved with cocaine.
Location: Country club
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Marriage Strain Emerges — Roger hears that Georgie may be slipping away as their marriage appears strained. Characters: Roger Lent, Georgie Lent
Location: Copper Canyon
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Ernie Pressures an Associate — Ernie pressures a business associate over a large unpaid debt. Characters: Ernie
Location: Unspecified
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Bank and Inspector Arrangements — Ernie describes arrangements involving the bank and building inspectors. Characters: Ernie
Location: Unspecified
Roger's Unresolved Ultimatum
Roger confronts Ted with allegations about the accounts, the fund, borrowing, and building materials. He demands a promotion, doubled pay, and additional shares; Ted threatens him and leaves for golf without resolving the ultimatum.
Key Events
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Roger Demands Advancement — Roger confronts Ted, demanding the vice-president position and a higher salary. Characters: Roger Lent, Ted's Secretary
Location: Unspecified
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Roger Lists His Accusations — Roger cites questionable state-account dealings, the Y.G.F. fund, excessive borrowing, and poor building materials. Characters: Roger Lent, Ted's Secretary
Location: Unspecified
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Ted Threatens Roger — Ted mocks and threatens Roger, who insists on doubled pay and additional shares. Characters: Roger Lent, Ted's Secretary
Location: Unspecified
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Ted Leaves for Golf — Ted says he must leave to play golf, leaving Roger's ultimatum unresolved. Characters: Roger Lent, Ted's Secretary
Location: Unspecified