Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Invention and The Blitz
Orphaned sisters Thomasina and Martha Hanbury live in isolation until Thom invents Lola, a machine that intercepts future broadcasts. When WWII begins, they use Lola to warn civilians of German air raids, saving countless lives and drawing military attention.
Key Events
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Orphanage Invention — Thom builds Lola to tap future signals. Location: Isolated English House
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Blitz Broadcasts Begin — Sisters warn civilians of air raids. Location: Isolated English House
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Holloway Discovery — British officer locates broadcast source. Location: Isolated English House
Military Coordination and Fracturing Bonds
Lt. Holloway and his superior Cobcroft inspect Lola, integrating its signals into RAF operations. While Mars and Holloway fall in love, Thom becomes increasingly obsessed with the machine, isolating herself and straining her relationship with Mars.
Key Events
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Holloway Discovery — British officer locates broadcast source. Location: Isolated English House
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Cobcroft Inspection — Superior officer reviews the machine. Location: Isolated English House
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RAF Bomber Destruction — Lola intel destroys German bombers. Location: RAF Command Center
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Romance Ignites — Mars and Holloway begin dating. Location: Isolated English House
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Thom's Isolation — Thom banishes Mars and Holloway. Location: Isolated English House
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Future Signal Shift — Bowie replaced by fascist musician Watson. Location: Isolated English House
Altered Timelines and The Arrest
Thom's interventions cause catastrophic timeline shifts, including the sinking of an American ship and the withdrawal of US support. Suspecting the sisters of espionage after a failed invasion prediction, Cobcroft arrests and sentences them to death.
Key Events
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Future Signal Shift — Bowie replaced by fascist musician Watson. Location: Isolated English House
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Atlantic Trap Success — Thom orchestrates U-boat trap. Location: Battle of the Atlantic
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Lincoln Sinking — Trap sinks American ship, killing 2000. Location: Atlantic Ocean
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US Support Withdraws — America refuses to enter the war. Location: Political Command
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German Invasion Deception — Signals mislead British about landing site. Location: Southampton / Dover
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Sisters Arrested — Cobcroft arrests them as double agents. Location: Courtroom
Occupation, Betrayal and The Meta-Loop
During a German bombing, Mars and Holloway escape while Thom is captured and collaborates with the fascist regime. Mars attempts an assassination, leading to a violent confrontation where both sisters die. Mars leaves a meta-recording to warn her past self.
Key Events
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Sisters Arrested — Cobcroft arrests them as double agents. Location: Courtroom
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London Attack Chaos — German bombing interrupts the trial. Location: London Courtroom
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Cornwall Escape — Couple flees during the bombing. Location: Cornwall
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Thom Captured — Germans free Thom from custody. Location: London
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Fascist Collaboration — Thom joins the new fascist regime. Location: Collaboration Government
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Hitler Visit — Dictator inspects Thom's research. Location: Thom's House
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Mars Plants Bomb — Mars detonates bomb targeting Germans. Location: Thom's House Yard
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Mars Execution — Mars hanged but shoots soldiers. Location: Front Yard
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Thom's Death — Thom rescues Mars but is fatally shot. Location: Front Yard
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V-E Day Photo — Final image shows contrasting expressions. Location: Celebration Crowd
A bored young man meets with his former girlfriend, now a cabaret dancer and single mother, and soon finds himself falling back in love with her.